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06/16/2005 07:08:43 PM |
That is really cool. A+ for imagination. The way you did the chain is great. |
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05/01/2005 10:41:14 PM |
Text is very dark...difficult to read. Good composition though. |
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05/01/2005 08:06:44 PM |
Very professional look. May be a little too dim on the letters but great angle. |
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05/01/2005 11:23:18 AM |
Astounding depth of field with great color. The layout to match the curves of a snake is just subtle enough not to be overpowering but without going unnoticed. This looks consumately professional. Have fun winning the challenge! |
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05/01/2005 04:20:52 AM |
Clever idea, I would have prefered slightly greater depth of field to show more of the Neclace, however I appreciate this has been deliberatly chosen my you, for the affect. |
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05/01/2005 01:22:01 AM |
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04/30/2005 11:24:36 PM |
Type is a little too subtle on my monitor -- I'd have made it a bit brighter. |
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04/30/2005 08:59:43 PM |
Hard to tell exactly what is been advertised |
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04/30/2005 12:48:40 PM |
I like this a bit. the composition is very good and your use of focus with the necklace going from focus to extreme blur is a very nice touch. Like the colos as well. The jewels and setting a just a bit dark and lose some detail.
edit: changed blue to blur....yeesh.
Message edited by author 2005-05-02 08:09:40. |
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04/29/2005 11:21:13 PM |
Nearly perfect ... if only those jewels were shining! :) |
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04/29/2005 03:55:20 PM |
My favorite for the challenge - great job. |
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04/29/2005 03:38:57 PM |
This was great on top until i scrolled down and saw the jewel. I love the wispiness of the chain, but the jewel is lost too much in the black of the background. |
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04/28/2005 11:35:54 PM |
Wow, this is awesome! I really love this shot! Reminds me of the Sentinels in The MAtrix for some reason. Lots of movement which gives the rock a very 'organic' feel. Colours are rich and lighting is dead on. Sharpness seems very good as well, but unfortunatly... and sadly... its SOOO SMALL! ARg! I want to get closer to my screen. I'd wished for something a bit closer. Text is also a bit too 'non existant'. Other then that, Very Very nice work! 8 |
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04/28/2005 05:03:55 PM |
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04/28/2005 01:42:55 PM |
very, very good, great text, great photo. well done 10 |
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04/28/2005 12:40:52 PM |
Nice and subtle. Discret text, very good. |
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04/27/2005 09:45:15 PM |
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04/27/2005 09:21:33 PM |
I really like this. It is interesting and compelling. |
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04/27/2005 02:00:56 PM |
I like the fade out of focus... i could see this being used as an ad. Good Job |
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04/27/2005 01:38:42 PM |
tell me this isnt a real ad? you must be a pro at this... wow. everything about this screams professionalism :-)
I love you the text appears and disappers when you look at the image from different angles. the design aspects of the image are near flawless and i love the flowing composition of the necklace. well done 10 |
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04/27/2005 10:41:56 AM |
Looks like a snake at the top end! ;^) I like the color combinations you used for this. The text may be just a bit too subdued, but I like the choice of font style, size and color. Only wish I could see just a little more of the main piece of jewelry. Good luck in the challenge. |
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04/27/2005 08:57:38 AM |
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04/27/2005 08:05:46 AM |
The mamba is one of the earth's most deadly poisonous snakes; when it bites, that's it. So I am entertained by the visual allusion to a snake in this photo as well as the textual one. It's a nice capture and negative space is used very well. |
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04/27/2005 04:46:41 AM |
Unique layout/composition here.
Image overall is a bit on the dark side inmy opinion, or the main jewelry cluster could have been a little bigger to offsets the lighting. Text/font used is great,and I like the subdued appearance of it, but again just a little too dark to me. |
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04/26/2005 05:59:05 PM |
The font, comp, and piece are outstanding. The font needs to be a different color as I can barely see the text. The piece should be larger and be the feature of the ad. Very nice, |
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04/26/2005 03:56:55 PM |
Subtle, sophisticated, professional. Great composition. Couple of comments: mamba too dark I think and perhaps pendant stones are sharpened beyond the available detail. Great overall |
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04/26/2005 02:21:31 PM |
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04/25/2005 08:59:22 PM |
the lettering is too light IMO |
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04/25/2005 06:53:31 PM |
I like the sinuous movement of this ad; it is very effective with the black background..well done..8 |
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04/25/2005 05:39:27 PM |
Love the lines. Excellent choice of font and font color. Composition might have worked a bit better if the front end of the jewel was placed with an angle instead of a straight horizontal line... Good work! |
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04/25/2005 04:17:28 PM |
A litle more light on the stones and lighter text would make this on great 7 |
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04/25/2005 03:51:47 PM |
Love the composition. Excellent DOF! The overall lighting on the necklace stones is too subdued and contrasty however. Overall excellent. 7 |
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04/25/2005 03:39:52 PM |
Very nice lighting and dof. You achieved a good contrast. The text choice is perfectly understated! 8 |
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04/25/2005 01:57:58 PM |
Much too dark ..... Diagonal composition work very well though |
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04/25/2005 11:14:00 AM |
I think you got hit by the same problem I did. Bet you composed this on an LCD monitor. But on CRT it's real dark and hard to read. So you'll probably lose a point or two for that.. But great composition...nicely done |
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04/25/2005 10:43:06 AM |
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04/25/2005 10:27:28 AM |
I like how the necklace fades away |
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04/25/2005 10:11:37 AM |
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04/25/2005 01:20:21 AM |
Wow Beautiful good work ! |
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04/25/2005 01:05:59 AM |
Nice use of chain as leadin viewer into photo. 8 |
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04/25/2005 01:01:19 AM |
font is faded or very light? like the lighting on the stone :-) gl |
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04/25/2005 12:26:11 AM |
I appreciate how the text does not overwhelm this image, a really nice subtle/simple picture. |
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