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04/16/2003 08:42:10 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - Very nice colors in this image. I like it as an abstract piece for the most part. I'd have cropped it tighter so the space on the top right wasn't so vast. The corner to corner framing works very well for this piece and gives it a nice dynamic flow. Because its more of an abstract piece, I have a hard time saying too much about it except for I think its pretty cool.
Technical - Since I have no idea how you did this, I don't really know what to say. I am interested to know though, so you could fill me in any time. I will say that it looks like the area around the light stream is a little pixelated. I don't know if thats from resolution or just the way it worked out, but I don't necessarily think its a bad thing either.
Overall - Your score is not a reflection of the quality of this pic but I think more of a reflection of the criteria the DPC crowd looks for. I think its a fine picture for the most part. I'll leave it at that and bid you good luck in upcoming challenges - Inspzil |
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04/12/2003 09:08:33 PM |
| interesting composition. how'd you do it and what is it. very pretty |
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04/12/2003 12:22:50 PM |
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04/11/2003 07:42:58 PM |
| I think this is a nice and interesting image, but am confused as to why you left the white space on the right. I think this would look very nice cropped to the image. Presentation is important, otherwise I would have scored this higher - 5 - Mav |
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04/11/2003 02:51:58 AM |
Very colourfull, but a bit to undefined for me.
P.S. What's that white line down the R.H.S? |
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04/10/2003 11:43:49 PM |
| I think this is an amazing photograph! |
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04/10/2003 06:48:36 PM |
| I wish I knew what this was. The colours are brilliant, but there isn't a lot of structure to the picture. |
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04/10/2003 09:09:47 AM |
| With a little better arrangement this would be a great abstract piece. I don't like the top right corner much but I do like the corner to corner configuration |
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04/09/2003 05:57:17 PM |
| Definitely meets the "colors" aspect of the challenge! Very cool. |
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04/08/2003 11:41:31 PM |
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04/08/2003 06:12:59 PM |
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04/08/2003 04:51:27 PM |
| nice, unique photo.. Like it! Do NOT like the white border on the right of the photo. You need to download and learn how to use PaintShop Pro. Good luck.. 7 |
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04/08/2003 02:20:17 PM |
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04/08/2003 02:18:20 PM |
| nice job nice use of color |
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04/08/2003 01:42:27 PM |
| This is a very interesting sub. It's a light bulb isn't it? |
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04/08/2003 10:21:41 AM |
| Wow, psychedelic, but colorful. I would have cropped out the white stripe on the right hand side though. |
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04/07/2003 01:17:10 PM |
| I really like the white bar on the right the most. |
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04/07/2003 12:13:28 PM |
| I like the soft focus here and the colors are beautiful |
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