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05/01/2005 11:00:26 PM |
| Not sure I get it...for an ad this might not get too much attention. Lot of background images that detract from the shot. |
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05/01/2005 05:45:23 PM |
| A bit blurry and the red stripe really takes my eye away from the jewelery. |
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05/01/2005 02:58:06 PM |
| Focus on the charms is too soft. What's the red line for? |
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05/01/2005 11:23:01 AM |
| I don't know if the red line is part of it or not, but it's distracting. Also the DOF seems off. Could just be my eyes though. |
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05/01/2005 01:06:15 AM |
| beautiful bracelet/neclace though the focus seem a bit soft, also the red line is awfully distracting, really draws away from the charms in my opinion. |
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04/30/2005 07:59:33 PM |
| the orange line is a little off putting 7 |
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04/30/2005 02:02:58 PM |
| Red line is quite distracting and the links of the bracelet are not in focus |
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04/29/2005 04:22:10 PM |
| There is a lot of noise on both sides of the bracelet. I find the red line a bit distracting. Its nice to see something other than a diamond or a watch though. Good luck in the challenge. |
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04/29/2005 03:32:20 PM |
| That red line is very distracting. The bracelet is out of focus. Not sure what suggestions to make to fix this.... |
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04/29/2005 01:56:36 PM |
| Too dark to attract my eye to the piece. |
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04/29/2005 01:30:49 PM |
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04/29/2005 07:27:07 AM |
| The color sat on the jewelery is nice. I think whatever that red line is distracts from the jewelery. Also a bit more light on the jewelery would have been nice. I know you were going for lowkey but the object of the photo should still be lit up when we are talking about a jewelery ad. 7 |
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04/28/2005 10:54:50 PM |
| Colours are something intriguing. The display of the jewel is an interesting idea, but doesn't work very well. The line is not even (slight leaning towards the right) and the Red line takes lots away from the eye. The background is wierd as its tainted with 'green'? spots all over, and the cloth used wasn't clean with SpotEditing, which shots through the black. 5 |
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04/28/2005 09:10:18 PM |
| Odd placement. Lacks focus just a bit. |
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04/28/2005 05:01:40 PM |
| Composition doesn`t really work here. |
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04/28/2005 04:55:08 PM |
| I don't know what the red line is, but it is distracting in the image. the background is blotchy, which also detracts from the overall image. |
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04/28/2005 02:54:43 PM |
| Interesting choice for composition, but what is that red line? |
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04/28/2005 02:23:03 PM |
| The orange line distracts, imho. |
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04/28/2005 10:00:42 AM |
| The red line is very distracting. The background seems dusty also. Interesting piece of jewelry, wish it had been presented a little differently. There seems to be some fun color in the bracelet - with the right lighting and a little closer look this could have been a great image. Good luck. |
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04/27/2005 09:43:35 PM |
| Is the red line there on purpose? It's distracting /opinion |
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04/27/2005 03:28:21 PM |
| The background is quite distracting I dont thing the red line adds anything |
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04/27/2005 11:38:25 AM |
| The Red line is a little distracting and the bracelet seems to be a little on the soft side. |
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04/26/2005 11:18:02 PM |
| Hmmm... I wonder who this is. Haha. |
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04/26/2005 10:30:15 PM |
Maybe a bit too close on the shot, thus losing some of it's sharpness in the process.
I don't know what the red stripe is, but it is a distraction in this shot (plus it's kinda' crooked too?) |
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04/26/2005 03:20:30 AM |
| I dont like the red stripe it seems to take the impact of your image away |
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04/25/2005 09:08:37 PM |
| I can't possibly be telling you something you haven't already heard but that orange line is just wrong and the charms should be in better focus. Cute bracelet, though. |
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04/25/2005 07:24:05 PM |
| Not sure your reason for the red line? I think the bracelet is nice but the focus is soft and the position seems ?stiff? |
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04/25/2005 01:15:59 PM |
| Focusing on the subject instead of the distracting red line would have been a good idea. |
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04/25/2005 10:15:17 AM |
| looks out of focus...and I don't understand why the red line is there. |
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04/25/2005 07:57:40 AM |
focus soft..possiable camera shake? red line distracts from jewelry...fix suggestions would be use a tripod and crop....good luck
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04/25/2005 02:20:44 AM |
| Nice, needs to be in focus on the gems as the silver is brilliant (rodium?) is destorting the focus. |
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04/25/2005 01:37:18 AM |
| What is that red line? Very distracting. |
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04/25/2005 01:30:49 AM |
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04/25/2005 12:53:22 AM |
| red line is? seems out of place |
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04/25/2005 12:24:45 AM |
| Perhaps you should try a little harder next time. A helpful hint... actually LOOK at the photo before you submit it. The red line that is at the edge of your backdrop is terribly distracting. |
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