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05/10/2005 01:05:25 AM |
Hello, greetings from the Critique Club.
Thank you for entering the DPChallenge, Minimalism.
This is a interesting take on the mininalism challenge. I see the inner workings of a computer. There are many parts, tubes, transistors, circuits, etc. Certainly the inside components of a computer are small and they do add to the total piece of the working puzzle. So I guess you are trying to focus in on the small parts in the bigger picture.
Initially looking at your image, it is hard to figure out where you appeal is. There really is not a main focal point to view. The message is there, but it is very hard to draw out. The title is a clue to your message, but the details are not clear.
The blue lighting is a good touch. It almost makes the hardware softer and moody. At the same time there is a lot of light blue constrast on the some of the metal bolt parts. This and the out of focus parts of the computer create a visual distraction.
Your depth of field could have been better. A lot of foreground is out of focus. What might have worked better, was to have a sharper image of the background as well. It seems that the smaller, tiny components could be classified as minimal.
Techicallly, there are several factors to address. The focusing, lighting, and subject matter.
1) Lighting seems to only provide a blue glow, it is not bringing out any of the highlights of the photo.
2) Much of the image is out of focus. I wonder how you even got the camera in that small space. Check your computer/image output when saving for this challenge. Try and keep as close to 150K as possible.
3)There might be some voters who might be wondering, "did this photo meet the challenge. Like where is the minimalism?
Overall it was a a brave attempt at presenting the minimalism challenge. Work on your subject content. Try different lighting resources. |
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05/03/2005 10:18:48 PM |
| I don't see the minimal part |
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05/03/2005 08:21:47 AM |
i love the blue
nice shot |
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05/02/2005 03:35:33 AM |
| technical i see, but where is the minmalism? |
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05/01/2005 09:44:36 PM |
| I see your point, but this does not meet the challenge description. On the other hand, I'd really like to know what I'm looking at. Are these coolant tubes, or light wave transmitters? |
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05/01/2005 02:32:00 PM |
| i wouldnt call this minimalism... not a fan of the blue lighting either. |
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04/30/2005 11:25:17 PM |
This shot is very busy and I don't understand even with the title, how it is supposed to meet the challenge...
TC |
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04/30/2005 04:04:49 PM |
| Interesting lighting but I don't see a strong subject. |
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04/30/2005 01:34:02 PM |
| Nice idea. How did you think of this? These brief words for the assignment leave these types of ideas open. Good luck. |
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04/30/2005 11:44:24 AM |
| i like the color in this photo |
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04/30/2005 10:26:16 AM |
| Well, it's a clever play on words but your gunna get fried for not quite meeting the challenge |
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04/30/2005 12:14:16 AM |
| Cool blue nice use of color |
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04/29/2005 10:40:47 AM |
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04/29/2005 12:38:58 AM |
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04/28/2005 11:48:57 PM |
| Too busy for the category. |
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04/28/2005 12:23:40 PM |
| macro picture, not minimalism. What is the subject? To me the whole picture is, not the challenge at hand. |
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04/28/2005 11:58:23 AM |
| Too many visual elements competing for my attention |
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04/28/2005 11:29:13 AM |
| Pretty good shot, but I think misses point of challenge. |
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04/28/2005 01:05:07 AM |
| cool shot... i'm finding it difficult to pick out the subject |
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04/28/2005 12:31:59 AM |
| I am confuised as to which subject is the main subject... which should be more pronounced (depth of field) than the objects that are not main. |
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04/27/2005 02:12:53 PM |
| While this may be a very interesting photo, and it may meet *a* definition of minimalism, in my mind it does not meet the challenge description. I like the lighting and the colors and detail, and it's a fine picture in it's own right, it simply doesn't feel like minimalism to me. |
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04/27/2005 02:01:43 PM |
| not sure what the focus point is in this picture |
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04/27/2005 11:47:21 AM |
| thats such a great photo but imo it dosnt meet the challenge |
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04/27/2005 09:34:33 AM |
| way too busy to be minimalism in my book |
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04/27/2005 06:40:48 AM |
| I think your take on this challenge was much different than mine, and that of most of the other photographers. This is a very nice image, but I would submit this under a "macro challenge". In a macro challenge I might score this a <10>, but in this challenge, I can't do that. Your subject does not occupy a very small portion of the image space. "Create an image where your subject is the strong point of the image, but only occupying a very small portion of the image space." <5> |
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