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05/08/2005 11:07:14 PM |
| The composition and colors are great. Bump. |
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05/08/2005 04:39:49 PM |
| Good composition except for cutting off the feet. Lighting is subtle, soft. Mood is powerful. |
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05/07/2005 11:32:32 PM |
| I like the use of flesh tones throughout this image. The only thing I think that I'd change is to remove her bracelets; they seem to be the only thing in the picture that doesn't look organic. There are discolorations on your model's arms and legs which look like faded bruises. But because of the mood conveyed by the pose, this is probably an asset in this case. |
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05/06/2005 04:42:58 PM |
| its interesting and definitely senses a mood of loniness, helplessness, and sadness. |
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05/06/2005 11:38:19 AM |
| great composition but overexposed in the back wich really damages the overall look, 6 |
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05/05/2005 10:59:04 PM |
| feels like the scenerio of her sleeping with someone she has feelings for but the other person doesnt feel the same about her... and kind of throws her feelings around. Am I the only one who sees this? maybe, but i like it |
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05/05/2005 10:46:24 PM |
| Great pose, I like the idea of the teddy bear too |
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05/05/2005 09:21:26 AM |
| I like the light, the tone, the posision of the model, everything .... but I would have liked to see the feet...9 from me :) |
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05/05/2005 02:13:54 AM |
| Excellent capture and use of negative space. Crisp image and strong message. Good luck! |
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05/04/2005 07:59:33 PM |
| No, sad is not the right word. I think perhaps shy and might be a better word. Well shot and tasteful. A little too monotone for my taste, but I think you intended that. |
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05/04/2005 07:51:26 PM |
| I was wondering when I'd see the gratuitous nude :) I like this, but don't like how blown out the wall is. |
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05/04/2005 11:51:38 AM |
| Nice composition. Properly sparse. I like the balance of hte girl and the bear and the continuous skin/earthtones. Well shot. |
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05/04/2005 10:15:40 AM |
kind of wish the vignetting was even in all the corners, but still it's a 10
... is that you, heida? |
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05/04/2005 09:29:59 AM |
| Nice collection of browns, but something about it feels too setup rather than pulling us in to a shot making us ask what has happened. The overblown highlights don't quite work for me, although it does almost look deliberate. |
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05/04/2005 06:49:04 AM |
| Wonderful tones and I really like the pose of your model but I'm not sure that cutting off her legs was the right thing to do. Looks like your lighting did not cover the entire image area and left a couple of dark spots in the upper corners. I'm sure the teddy bear has some symbolic meaning, but for me, it's inclusion in the photo makes the image less poignant and reduces it's impact. |
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05/04/2005 06:34:05 AM |
| Very raw, emotional image.... the teddy bear adds a nice dimension. |
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05/03/2005 09:45:32 PM |
| Oh... Wow! The model's pose is terrific. The shot itself is really not that bad but something is missing... The tones are off a bit. Good luck! |
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05/03/2005 09:03:42 PM |
| The tones in this shot are great. |
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05/02/2005 11:08:03 PM |
| evocative piece, with the pose and the color tones. sight vignet in upper right and left corners are very small flaws here. and were it not for the high contrasty wall, i'd give this a 10. but a 9 for an effort that I feel exceeded 95 percent of the shots entered in the challenge. |
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05/02/2005 07:17:22 PM |
| hmmmmmmm what to say about this image...I generally like it..tones nice, set up ok, angle of body a bit awkward (feet chopped off) and dark areas in the top right and left corners distracting 5 |
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05/02/2005 06:40:08 PM |
| nice composition hope it is staged . |
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05/02/2005 04:29:43 PM |
| Very moody, the light feels as though it just needs toning down a little to match the mood. For me this is stark |
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05/02/2005 01:48:13 PM |
| Nice capture. I think the flash toward the ceiling or wall would have taken the excess shine off the woman and back wall. |
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05/02/2005 09:14:03 AM |
| great idea...but there are a number of elements I'm not sure about...the bear, covers, toning. The pose and overall composition is great; not to mention the lighting effects. If desaturated/monochromed channel mixed really could be a high scorer |
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05/02/2005 08:58:25 AM |
| I like this alot,,,but I think maybe b&w would have been a good choice for this one as well,,,but I do love the shot,,great job,,, |
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05/02/2005 02:53:30 AM |
| A very beautiful ans sensitive image. 9 |
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05/02/2005 02:51:25 AM |
| Interesting photo, to bad I can not see the models expression. The shadow in behind her seems noisy or the wall over exposed. 8 |
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05/02/2005 01:12:31 AM |
| You're right sad is not the right word. if you really wanted to portray sadness try having her curl up in a ball lying down. Makes it seem like she's in the fetal position. |
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05/02/2005 12:37:39 AM |
| I really like this. The composition is great, the lighting right on and the emotion right in your face. |
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