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04/20/2003 10:00:38 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
COMPOSITION
The triangular arrangement of these flowers helps to add strength and stability to this composition. I think a broader or larger crop would have helped in that you could have then placed the flowers somewhere in the frame than just barely off of center. That may have helped to give a more dynamic, balanced feeling to the shot.
TECHNIQUE
The colors in this are wonderful. I love the deep hues of the purplish-pink flowers. I also think the green is a deep, rich color. I am undecided on the background color. Part of me likes it because it is different, and provides an interesting contrast with the leaves and color. The other part thinks it might cause just a bit too much "clash" with the purple hues. Also, the shadows are very distracting. I think a slower shutter speed, with the camera on a tripod, may have helped you . Or, perhaps you could have moved the subject away from the background.
OVERALL EFFECT
I think you have chosen a good subject for this challenge, but the areas mentioned above help chisel the effectiveness away from the shot.
Best to you in future challenges. |
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04/12/2003 07:50:13 PM |
| Nice effect! The post processing has done something here, it works! |
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04/12/2003 02:24:36 PM |
| shadow disrupts the beautiful subject... try with natural lighting....... |
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04/12/2003 12:42:59 PM |
| Nice shot. The shadows against the wall are a little distrating though. |
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04/11/2003 03:57:09 PM |
| Extraordinarily well detailed on the petals - I don't actually much like the darker purple flower - I think the bottom two stand on their own. |
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04/11/2003 01:19:04 AM |
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04/10/2003 10:12:02 PM |
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04/10/2003 02:35:51 AM |
| The shadowing against the wall from using the flash detracts from the shot. |
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04/09/2003 10:22:29 PM |
| Flat lighting makes this look like a funeral piece. The highlights on the greens surrounding the flowers are unsightly as well. Good subjects for this challenge really, but not particularly well executed. |
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04/09/2003 05:47:29 PM |
| Too much background shadow. Just an inherent flaw of the camera's built in flash. |
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04/09/2003 02:27:53 PM |
| Nice clear image. The image could be more colorful though. I don't consider white to be very colorful. But nice job. |
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04/08/2003 07:44:20 PM |
| I like the colors you choice to bring out on this very nice. |
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04/07/2003 09:35:54 PM |
| A solid white background and roomier cropping for this one |
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04/07/2003 03:03:42 PM |
| too bright.... deeper tones would be great! |
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04/07/2003 01:17:01 PM |
| wow i like the detail on these flowers good job |
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04/07/2003 10:29:44 AM |
| very nice image, good focus. I like the colors you chose yo work with, the bacround matches the image well. Good work |
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04/07/2003 10:08:34 AM |
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