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05/22/2005 08:43:19 PM |
Hello from the Critique Club!!!
Composition:
This is a very nicely composed shot and it is great to see that you keep trying to get the shot right for you.
Not all of us can see the beauty inside a computer but you have achieved it with this photo. I like the angle and the lighting. The view of the fan and crisp lime green adds to the overall appeal. I think this a perfect shot for Stock photography. Met the challenge “Outside Looking In” well
Background/ Foreground
The shallow DOF has the background blurred which is good since there is so much going on in the foreground.
Camera Work:
The focus is good and the colors are bright and crisp. The lighting is a okay but the white on the power is a bit over exposed. This takes away the some of the detail.
Post-Processing:
I think you got it all right in your editing.
My Opinion:
This is a nice shot, you took the time to go back and try it again from a different perspective and this time you achieved your goals. Each of us learns from each shot we take and the comment made from fellow DPC members. Good Job!
I hope you find these comments to be helpful, thank you for allowing me to critique your picture. If you have any questions or concerns feel free to contact me via PM.
Best of luck in your future photographic endeavors,
Regards,
Karen Doss
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05/14/2005 04:38:29 AM |
| I like the idea. I feel that a less bussy composition may have more impact. |
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05/09/2005 12:18:09 PM |
| greater dof would help this image be more effective, imho, and there's a bit of an overexposure on the right hand side. that said, i do like the colors presented and the general idea behind the shot. |
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05/09/2005 10:00:20 AM |
| Wouldn't dare show mine! Has cat fluff :( this looks colorful and interesting... |
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05/09/2005 06:31:56 AM |
| Great concept - great colors but a little messy |
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