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04/29/2003 08:45:38 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
FIRST IMPRESSION:
Nice tightly cropped shot that fits the challenge very well. Not many people showed the effects that weather would have on common everyday items and I think you did this well.
COMPOSITION:
Like I said before I think your choice of cropping works good on this shot. It doesn't have a lot of extra clutter that would otherwise take away from this shot.
TECHNICAL:
The focusing is pefect and so is the DOF. The lock/shed is all in focus which really enables the rust and the texture to be seen.
OVERALL:
Great shot for the challenge. It is interesting to see just how close you can get for a shot with your new closeup lenses. Since the picture doesn't show much color, I think it would have been benefical to take it into PS and try some grayscale or duotone. Alone it is a great shot and definently meets the challenge.
Good luck! |
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04/20/2003 08:30:19 PM |
Very good shot. Meets the challenge very well. Makes me want to know what is locked away. (Cobweb is a good touch, also). |
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04/20/2003 05:19:41 PM |
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04/20/2003 04:17:46 PM |
excellent macro and phenomenal detail... the rust shows weather effects with a lot of strength... great shot :) - setzler |
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04/20/2003 02:05:34 PM |
very nice lines and curves good exposure and composition. Great show of effects of weather. Exposure a little light on the top. |
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04/20/2003 12:42:17 AM |
I love this shot, because its totally different to the other 229 photos. |
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04/17/2003 11:37:25 PM |
Nice colours and texture. (9) |
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04/17/2003 01:40:37 PM |
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04/17/2003 12:10:21 PM |
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04/17/2003 04:57:22 AM |
Original but fitting. This is an excellent macro shot, very detailed. |
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04/16/2003 09:42:31 PM |
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04/16/2003 05:17:21 PM |
reminds me of a boar's snout for some reason. i like the interpretation of the challenge, its certainly an effect of weather! DOF is a little shallow, as I would have liked to see the whole unit in focus, but that's nitpicky! |
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04/15/2003 10:04:16 PM |
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04/15/2003 12:10:06 AM |
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04/14/2003 01:47:50 PM |
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