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05/22/2005 06:50:36 PM |
Concept: Nice idea, but composition detracts too much.
Composition: Good placement of subject and light, but very oof, with light streaming through the wings, hurting the challenge topic. Blur factor on background and subject make this seem very overprocessed on a ho-hum image.
Challenge: Almost. Too much light/detail in the subject. |
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05/21/2005 05:04:59 PM |
Would be better if it had been sharper. |
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05/20/2005 10:06:38 PM |
Could have been good if you brought the black-point way up in Photoshop (or any other photo editor that lets you edit the histogram) |
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05/20/2005 09:33:20 PM |
I wish I had better comments for you, but the best way to learn is someone pointing out what could be done better in the future. The image is out of focus. You do have the right idea on how to create a silhouette... however, the bright spot of what appears to be a flashlight behind the moth is very distracting. This image also appears pixelated as if you tried to resize too much. Good luck in future challenges! |
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05/19/2005 02:04:57 PM |
One of the most interesting shots in the challenge, nice work. |
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05/17/2005 09:42:12 AM |
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05/17/2005 07:57:16 AM |
would be more effective if the moth was sharper |
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05/17/2005 12:39:31 AM |
Good composition. The colors look a little bit hazy. Congrats on capturing a silhouette that still has interesting detail. |
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05/16/2005 07:49:31 AM |
Has some grayish cast. Think it could be fixed with more contrast |
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05/16/2005 12:44:48 AM |
Nice, the moth being more in focus or not so soft, and the light behind it being more subdued would work wonders, for me that is. 7 |
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