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05/22/2005 06:55:27 PM |
Concept: Good subject, very bad background choice.
Composition: The screen would have been better cropped to show no evidence of the window sill.
Challenge: Yes, definitely, but the background is so harshly lit and ultimately ugly as to detract from the potential that this image could have achieved. |
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05/20/2005 10:42:39 PM |
| It would have been better if you had cropped the top a bit lower to get rid of the black in the upper left corner. Also the screen is a bit distracting. |
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05/19/2005 12:11:04 AM |
| A tighter crop to eliminate the window sill (?) would have made this a bit more effective, I believe. |
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05/17/2005 05:59:52 PM |
| The sun is in the perfect place for this photo. It would have been better without the screen I think. |
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05/17/2005 03:53:22 PM |
| The texture of the screen is very distracting as well as the way the window cuts into the top of the picture. |
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