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08/22/2005 11:28:06 AM |
| I agree with the other comments and think that perhaps a slightly off-center composition might improve it. You've got good lighting and tones. |
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05/23/2005 05:27:36 AM |
| Good capture - classic rooftop shot. Very slight lack of detail in the area around the chest and RHS of bird - very slight jaggies, plus very slight halo makes me wonder if a fraction less sharpening might improve. I might also have made the blue of the sky a little more intense, to capture the contrast with the orange light on the bird's chest. Central composition is fine, but I would experiment with variations on the third lines, and if printing large, with a "minimalist" style shot of this bird and a nice big, plain sky above and a wider crop.. |
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