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04/25/2003 03:19:14 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club :)
Hi Daysez...
This still life composition is nice... Compositionally, there are a few things that I would have explored to see the results... I may have rotated the basked a little to allow the handle to create a stronger sense of three dimension and depth in the image.
A little more depth of field may have makde an improvement here as well. The front edge of the basket seems just a tiny bit soft.
I'm a little concerned about the background material in this shot. I, personally, think it adds too much contrast to the image and makes it a bit busy overall.
Keep up the good work :)
John Setzler
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04/18/2003 11:00:38 PM |
| Like the candy and the basket however, I think a softer background would have been better as i think the blue check is a bit too distracting. |
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04/17/2003 10:27:54 PM |
| Fun colors, enhanced by the background. Seems slightly out of focus. |
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04/17/2003 06:45:21 PM |
| Really cute. Good focus. Nice (a bit busy) background. Color seems good on the basket and cloth, but the kisses seem overly saturated. 8 Rob the Swash |
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04/15/2003 10:52:24 AM |
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04/15/2003 04:30:40 AM |
| I don't like the background. I think its too busy for this basket which is pretty busy itself in a cute way. I think a lot of the reason I don't like the background is because at the top of the basket it doesn't look like it really should be there. It looks kind of fake in other words. |
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04/15/2003 01:02:21 AM |
| Excellent focus - And great easter candy colors. I even likethe bg, though I wish it were flat. |
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04/15/2003 12:26:16 AM |
| might have cropped out the bottom of the photo where you can see the dish towel edge curving off the table. odd choice of background, and i think the limited DOF hurt you here as the basket is a little out of focus, looking a little too plastic (maybe it is) with both the front focus looking soft and the handle vs. the background clashing a little. cropping in on just the candies might have helped, as the labels come out very crisp. |
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04/15/2003 12:11:02 AM |
| did it just happen this way, or is the a reversed (flipped side to side) shot. looks like the old film-based reverse negative. |
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04/14/2003 05:52:11 PM |
| Cute, cute basket....background is a bit too busy with all that's going on here. Nice try, love the colors. |
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04/14/2003 02:34:32 PM |
| Background is a little distracting. |
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04/14/2003 02:06:12 PM |
| Nice idea, but it might have worked better with a different background. |
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04/14/2003 03:49:00 AM |
| Very colorful and cheerful as candy should be. Nice choice of background. Good photograph. |
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