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04/23/2003 03:22:34 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - This is my favorite kind of image to critique, not a bad image with loads of potential. This image might have been better served to focus on the hill more as opposed to having it way off to the side. I don't know what the landscape had to offer over there though, so there may be a perfectly good reason why you didn't. The sky is awesome. Great colors and very well exposed. Too bad there weren't a few more trees or anything to add a little texture to your silhouette. Overall I say its a good composition.
Technical - This is where this image falters a little and I think it's all in the focus or lackthereof. This shot really sharp with a little of anything as a silhouette would be awesome. It needs to be sharp though with clearly visible silhouettes or it really loses our attention that the sky initially grabbed. Very good job exposing this properly. Your timing was excellent.
Overall - My feeling about this image is that its pretty good, but really has a world of potential. A couple of people in this pic with it a little closer to make them more distinguishable would be great. Sometimes the people just aren't around though, especially at sunrise. This is a nice shot. Good luck and keep shooting these sunrises. - Inspzil |
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04/20/2003 06:03:41 PM |
| at the top of the hill is a cross !!! |
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04/20/2003 01:59:26 PM |
| Has potential, could be more sharply focussed. |
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04/19/2003 07:35:36 AM |
| Sunrises rock. Nice colors and cloud formations. I really like the silhouettes of the landscape too. Good solid pic |
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04/17/2003 01:44:32 PM |
| Pretty good image. I like the different colors displayed in the image. Good job. |
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04/16/2003 07:59:39 PM |
| nice composition but a little grainy in my monitor. . |
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04/15/2003 02:25:46 PM |
| Interesting shot. Looks like you didn't use a tripod. |
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04/14/2003 12:03:20 PM |
| Pretty colours, nice skyline. |
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04/14/2003 11:41:20 AM |
| Wow, that's one firey sky you captured there. Looks fantastic, and the silohuette of the hills gives this image so much impact. |
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04/14/2003 10:29:27 AM |
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