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Challenge: Construction (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix A340 Zoom
Location: RI Medical Center, Cranston, RI
Date: Jun 3, 2005
Aperture: f5.6
ISO: 64
Shutter: 1/480sec
Date Uploaded: Jun 4, 2005

One of a few buildings being restored at what was once the RI Medical Center. The mentally ill were once incarcerated in these buildings; they will now be used as office space. Cropped, curves and adjusted brightness.

Statistics
Place: 194 out of 305
Avg (all users): 4.8485
Avg (commenters): 4.7273
Avg (participants): 4.6923
Avg (non-participants): 4.9701
Views since voting: 705
Views during voting: 375
Votes: 297
Comments: 13
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06/14/2005 11:14:38 PM
I don't think the wall in the foreground adds anything. The composition it a little uninteresting, sorry. Maybe taken at a different angle?
06/14/2005 08:20:40 PM
Overall, this is a very nice shot. A closer crop (the blurry stone wall in front in front is distracting) would have improved the image, though.
06/14/2005 06:43:15 PM
The wall at the bottom is a bit distracting.
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06/14/2005 11:01:43 AM
The stone wall helps some, but I'm still a little bored by the composition of this shot.
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06/14/2005 09:55:16 AM
fits challenge great, but just lacks something
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06/12/2005 06:28:26 PM
The stone wall in the forground "Kills" the image.
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06/09/2005 01:32:21 PM
I would have liked a little more light on the front of the building.
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06/09/2005 06:15:03 AM
you probably could've made this shot more interesting: could you get a different angle? At least stand on something to get the wall out of the way.
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06/09/2005 03:05:46 AM
The wall at the bottom seems distracting..try straigtning out the picture a little to the left and crop the wall..
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06/09/2005 02:04:42 AM
This is a fitting subject and a good idea. The framing is putting me off just a little though. There seems to be an obvious 'tilt' present in the photo. It's hard to tell if the horizon in the distant background is actually level, but the structure itself, and especially the ledge in the foreground are tilted. This could be corrected with arbitrary rotation in ps. I'm also thinking that maybe if the ledge were actually cropped out, or maybe at least to the ledge itself, removing the 'rock wall' portion in the bottom of the frame it could make the shot stronger, as to me, it seems to just be a distraction to your main subject.
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06/08/2005 07:05:41 PM
Neat house. I wish you could have either cropped out the ledge on the bottom of the picture, or moved closer to the house.
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06/08/2005 06:58:23 PM
Great Composition, Good Color and Focus...
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06/08/2005 03:44:27 PM
I like this. Perhaps better without the wall.
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