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01/03/2006 05:06:18 PM |
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09/01/2005 11:24:18 AM |
| I like the composition on this photo. You have an arrangment of interesting objects to capture the eye's attention. The curve of the lines on the roof as the flow diagonally across invokes fluid motion - one that the eye follows and appreciates. Next to it the viewer can take in the sights of the blue sky and clouds. I know that this may not have been possible or you may not have had the time. But I wonder if you could have waited a little while such that the clouds were arranged all in the lower left hand corner. In that way it would look like the white clouds were a 'front' moving in on the 'weather front' of the "white curve' roof. A visual of a natural weather front going up against a man-made 'weather' front. Again it may not have been possible due to mother nature not being the best model to work with:-) and time constrants. |
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07/10/2005 11:58:51 PM |
| I love everything about this! The curves, the sky, everything. If you had put this in the leading lines challenge you would have gotton GREAT scores. This is a great angle. |
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07/02/2005 08:46:33 AM |
ditto what david said...i love the shot. looks like this could be a great place for you to shoot around. have fun!
(and, just in case you haven't stumbled across this thread, you might find it useful. you have a good eye and your comments indicate you have the ability to see. all you need to do is marry up your talent with challenge interpretation, and you'll do great here! here's the thread.) |
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06/20/2005 02:46:17 PM |
| Hi Judy, this is a great shot. It could be sharper. I suspect the reason for the score is that it doesn't scream "construction." Keep up the great work! |
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06/15/2005 02:08:56 AM |
| Thanks for the suggestions and comments! I learned alot - this was my first entry. |
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06/14/2005 06:04:44 PM |
| Shame it isnt a bit sharper, I really like the composition and subject. The abstract quality really makes it stand out. |
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06/13/2005 09:28:06 PM |
| Very nice composition and colors |
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06/11/2005 01:25:36 PM |
| Interesting element of design. |
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06/11/2005 12:58:05 PM |
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06/09/2005 10:42:51 PM |
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06/09/2005 09:13:18 PM |
| wouldve rated this a 10 if the sky was brighter, seems you added a blue cast to it... white clouds would of done wonders with the steel! also wouldve liked to see the steal shine better as well, and sharpened up. Still a neat photo |
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06/08/2005 11:14:12 PM |
| Nice image, but my interpretation of the theme of construction is present tense. |
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06/08/2005 09:29:24 PM |
| This is a beautiful shot, but I don't see the construction...this looks built! All in all this is a nice photograph, but it seems more suited for a lines or an architecture challenge. Who knows? Maybe I'm being too critical...all the same, good luck! |
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06/08/2005 06:25:25 PM |
| Great Composition, Good Color and Focus... |
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06/08/2005 01:24:12 PM |
| looks finished to me, grainy too |
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06/08/2005 12:39:50 AM |
| Beautiful photograph! This would have been perfect for the "Lines" challenge. |
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