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06/21/2005 09:14:43 PM |
| focus seems extremely soft. |
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06/21/2005 02:55:31 PM |
| I like the grainy-ness of this, but I do wish for more details that pop out. As it is, it feels a bit flat and washed out. 5 |
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06/21/2005 11:20:09 AM |
| Although I like the photo, I think it is softened a bit too much. |
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06/20/2005 09:41:17 AM |
Capturing rays of sunlight on an overcast day is a worthy concept for this difficult challenge topic. But this is an example of a great idea that gets lost in the generally poor technical quality of the final composition.
You may have left this there intentionally but most viewers will see color and electronic noise in the image as a technical flaw and not an artistic expression.
Focus is exceptionally poor and the open areas through the clouds are excessively overexposed. That is very, very hard to get right in an image of this type.
Compositionally you could increase the drama of the rays by cropping about an inch off the top and right sides of the image. This will extend the influence of the rays across the full frame and give them a more dominent position in the composition. |
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06/18/2005 08:39:41 PM |
| Too much noise, and out of focus. |
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06/17/2005 09:33:16 PM |
| Nice catch. Little more sharpness would help IMO. |
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06/17/2005 02:45:40 PM |
| i like the idea of the picture but it isa bit too fuzzy for me, a good contrast, the light emphasizes the darkness |
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06/17/2005 02:53:01 AM |
| Nice concept, but a bit grainy and the light areas over-exposed. The composition is spot-on though, with the beams of light guiding the viewer's eye around the image. |
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06/16/2005 08:58:20 PM |
| very noisy, pretty though |
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06/16/2005 08:48:20 PM |
Base score 5
Poor light/comp/proc -1
Total score 4
Great idea...photo seems out of focus though |
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06/16/2005 05:21:31 PM |
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06/16/2005 12:24:59 PM |
| What beautiful colors! I found the graininess distracting though. |
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06/15/2005 09:22:17 AM |
| Seems out of focus, and the grains are enough to distract me from the scene. |
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