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06/21/2005 01:00:07 PM |
| That black band across the shot is way too distracting |
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06/21/2005 06:39:29 AM |
| I like the expressuion of the eye. But does it fit the challenge? Maybe I'm not too good with abstracts. |
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06/18/2005 08:30:13 PM |
| The detail on the eye is wonderful, but I think that black something is a bit distracting especially considering that there is more picture under it. Maybe if the picture just ended with black on the bottom without more light? |
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06/18/2005 02:10:45 AM |
| Lovely detail in the pupil - your use of sepia really brings that out. What is the bar across the photo though? The frame of a pair of glasses? I really like how you lit the face, making the area around the eye a bit blown out - it really seperates the darker part of the eye and draws the viewers attention to it. |
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06/17/2005 09:41:12 PM |
| Not sure why the large dark line through the photo. |
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06/17/2005 04:30:40 PM |
| what is the great black line? Why did you choose to include it in the composition? |
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06/17/2005 08:10:12 AM |
| I feel whatever the dark thing is that is cutting through the image has ruined it. |
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06/16/2005 08:31:10 PM |
| The silhoetted object really throws the composition off. 4 |
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06/16/2005 07:51:40 PM |
| this could have been a really great image if that big dark line weren't there....unless that was the point? |
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06/16/2005 06:30:39 PM |
| maybe show little bit more the eye expresion. |
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