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06/28/2005 03:15:27 PM |
From the Critique Club
I think this is a very powerful image. Nicely framed and proportioned. The lack of light at the top left corner and lower corner adds to the effect. Nice detailed b&w image.
The window is a little to overpowering for me. But nice effect on the floor on the light casting. But I could see how some would like that. Their is also a slight cant in the window but barely noticeable. Would have liked to see a bit of dust in the sunlight but it just knit picking. Very well rounded photo. |
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06/20/2005 04:40:19 PM |
| I like this concept for the theme. Would have liked to have seen more of the light moving through particles but that all depends on the setting. Nice shot though, good framing! |
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06/20/2005 08:30:20 AM |
| A nice take on this challenge. The shape of the window feels like we're in a medieval castle or cloister. The inclusion of the light shining on the ground adds interest to the photo and also shows us the texture of the floor. I'm not sure the tippiness of the lines (floor and right wall) work so well, but still a good shot. |
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06/19/2005 02:29:00 PM |
| The slightly off verticals are distracting, as is the line down the right hand edge. A rotation and a tighter crop would really help this image. 4 |
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06/17/2005 04:01:41 PM |
| ohhhhh, if this was just tilted so that the window was vertical and the right wall was cropped out it would be a top pic... great capture |
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06/15/2005 02:42:33 PM |
| Would be better if leveled. |
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06/15/2005 10:25:29 AM |
| This would work much better without the distrating line on the frame's right side. A unique idea, and you made good use of the frame. |
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06/15/2005 01:48:38 AM |
| Very well shot! Perfect for the challenge. Lighting is great. |
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