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06/25/2005 01:00:43 PM |
| A slightly deeper DoF, with the focus point pushed back so that at least all of the bowl of the spoon was in focus would help. Also, the odd shadow/highlight in the top right corner is distracting from the subject. A jauntier angle would have made this more interesting. |
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06/25/2005 06:13:11 AM |
| whatever is happening in the upper right hand corner is distracting to me. otherwise, i like it. |
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06/24/2005 10:30:56 PM |
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06/24/2005 12:57:04 AM |
| Out of focus. Misfit title. |
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06/23/2005 09:42:17 PM |
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06/23/2005 03:53:43 PM |
| my goal is to comment on every photo in this challenge..heres urs..good luck..simple but elegant |
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06/23/2005 01:40:15 PM |
This is a good start to what I consider "product photography". Shiny metal is quite difficult to photograph in studio. Especially spoons. Let me try to critique this from a purely technical studio approach. The composition to me looks not very well thought out. The front edge ofthe spoon is barely visible. I would like to see the entire rim be lit. The business end of the spoon would be better if it were all in focus. I don't mind the handle fading out at all. The tone is good throughout, but the upper right edge is a bit distracting. It looks as though it is the edge of your backdrop.
I hope this helps and isn't taken wrong. This is a very difficult subject matter to pull off well. |
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06/22/2005 04:14:22 PM |
| Like the b&w, like the lighting on the spoon, like the title. nicely done. |
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06/22/2005 01:10:47 AM |
That is a great photo.
Destruction? Heroine? or food..... |
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