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05/08/2003 06:32:04 AM |
Greets from the Critique Club!
Hi Owen,
I particularly enjoyed this shot because I felt it was a good execution of a good idea. The DOF is good on the Celica but I would have liked to see a little more on both the porches. On the top porsche that front headlight out focus is distracting too me and on the bottom it's the out of focus taillight that bothers me.
As for the composition - I like the colours you put together, red, yellow, and blue and I like the drop shadowing on the pictures and the text. It makes this pleasing to look at.
Overall a good job in my opinion! Good luck in the next challenge!
-Matt |
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05/03/2003 05:29:52 PM |
Heh.. how did a toyota celica get in there with two porsches? |
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05/02/2003 06:12:23 PM |
Neat idea! Very clear shots. Lighting is harsh and glaring. The angled views of the cars is very nice. This is a bit of a nit (and probably asking for too much), but two Porsches and a Toyota? I would suggest more variety or less (no points involved at all). 7 Rob the Swash |
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05/02/2003 01:09:42 AM |
and you own them all! nicely done. you might have takent the shots on a black plasterboard and not had the stand visible in the photo, but the combination of the shots is very well done. |
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05/01/2003 07:08:20 PM |
woo hoo. Too bad they're only the small kind :) nice colours. Good luck Jacko. |
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04/29/2003 04:05:48 PM |
My dream car is a black Porsche, so what can i say? :) Nice slick presentation. Good pictures (some artifacts on the 996 but that's due to the enormous resizing, i think). A real multi-image. 9 Journey |
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04/29/2003 12:11:55 PM |
What in the world is that Toyota doing in this picture. Not the same class of car. Well done but I would have prefered to see the real things. |
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04/29/2003 01:13:59 AM |
Great image! The photos are all nicely done and make for a well balanced piece. |
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04/28/2003 11:40:24 AM |
I would have used green instead of blue. |
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04/28/2003 11:29:45 AM |
Well chosen font and border decisions - looks like something I can imagine on sale on a postcard in a motor enthusiasts shop or at a rally or such. Nice colours, lighting a little harsh. |
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04/28/2003 10:51:04 AM |
This is a great take on the classic car posters. Very original idea! |
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04/28/2003 02:39:26 AM |
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04/28/2003 12:28:25 AM |
Toyota celica a dream car? :) Recognize the tail in my profile photo? Anyway, nice idea for the photo. Would have liked a solid black "platform" instead of what you're using.. Would have hid the somewhat distracting shadows a little better. All of the cars look very slightly soft -- maybe more DOF needed. |
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04/28/2003 12:19:43 AM |
Oh yeah Toyota Celica! Kinda out of place among Porches, but one of my favorite cars nonetheless = ) Nice job |
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