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Jeni's Etude
Jeni's Etude
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Challenge: Multi-Image Compositions (Classic Editing*)
Camera: Sony DSC-F707
Location: River Heights, UT
Date: Apr 24, 2003
Aperture: f2.0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/30
Galleries: Portraiture, Diptych / Triptych
Date Uploaded: Apr 25, 2003

This is my daughter Jeni, practicing her harp. The center photo was taken with only natural light from the french doors.

Statistics
Place: 37 out of 116
Avg (all users): 6.0629
Avg (commenters): 7.6364
Avg (participants): 5.9451
Avg (non-participants): 6.2692
Views since voting: 1215
Votes: 143
Comments: 14
Favorites: 1 (view)


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05/05/2003 01:02:55 AM
Marianne, had given you an 8 but had no time to comment. Like how this presentation give a good sense of what is must feel like to play the harp. The framing with the yellow harp details is rather bold, but it works and very effective in telling the 'story'. Good job!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/04/2003 11:40:06 PM
The left and right images are really clear, but the center seems soft or a bit out of focus, otherwise very nice...
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05/04/2003 10:20:02 PM
Great job, the 2 outter photos almost give you the view and feeling of what it's like to be her playing it.
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05/04/2003 03:21:57 AM
This was a good choice for a multi-image shot, because the right and left side shots are good shots, but without a context they would be hard to identify for someone not familar with the harp. However, the middle shot provides that context, and therefore makes the other shots more effective. Good work. 7
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05/02/2003 09:00:55 AM
The proportional frame is good, though it could be a little heavy and dark. Subject of harp player and especially the instrument is interesting. The image is balanced and formal... and thoughtfully composed.
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05/02/2003 01:21:36 AM
I like how the golden lines lead upward and frame the center frame. Lots of interesting lines here!
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05/01/2003 09:45:24 AM
I'd put this on the wall.
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04/30/2003 02:52:37 PM
Nice presentation of this delicate instrument. These thick black borders don't do it any justice though.
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04/28/2003 04:33:29 PM
Amazing triptych. No matter what place it will end up at the end of the week, I think it's a winner!
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04/28/2003 03:08:51 PM
Great composition. I really like the different angles. Colors really pop! Congrats!
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04/28/2003 11:44:09 AM
Very nice. Lots of interesting lines.
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04/28/2003 10:56:16 AM
VERY nice, and what a talented child. You must be very proud. I find the carpet in the first frame a little distracting, but thats the only thing maybe I would change. Good job. 8
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04/28/2003 10:11:53 AM
Nice. I like the colours, in particular the yellow and the two blues at the opposite top corners. Possibly the composition would have been more effective if the interior margins (the blacks between the three pictures) would have been smaller than the outside edge.
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04/28/2003 02:27:38 AM
Very tenderly done: she must be one with the instrument which seems as delicate as she.
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