| Author | Thread |
|
|
05/10/2003 10:22:39 AM |
*Critique Club*
FIRST IMPRESSION: Good composition, cute twist on the subject!
CHALLENGE: Meets the challenge even if these aren't transportation quite yet. Maybe they're more of a concept vehicle at this point? ;-)
COMPOSITION: Excellent composition, the position of th efeet relative to each other leads the eye in a circle and helps keep the viewer's eye in the shot. The blankets also help with this.
TECHNICAL: Good exposure and lighting. The light is strongest on the toes, which are the most interest aspect of this shot. The black and white helps accentuate shape and lighting over color, which is a good idea here. The disadvantage in this shot is that the black and white also leads the texture of the blanket to compete with your subject for the viewer's attention.
CONCLUSION: A strong entry, unfortunately black and white almost always gets mixed reviews here, especially when it produces both benefits and drawbacks as it did in this case.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in future challenges! |
|
 Photographer found comment helpful. |
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
|
05/06/2003 08:26:32 PM |
| I think this shot would have been more fun in colour. :) |
|
|
|
05/06/2003 05:02:43 PM |
| Your photo made me smile. There's something precious about infant's feet. |
|
|
|
05/04/2003 08:50:10 PM |
| Wonderful shape. Well exposed. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/04/2003 02:09:36 AM |
| I bet these feet haven't transported anything even one step yet. (just kidding - 7) |
|
|
|
05/01/2003 11:20:02 AM |
| Nice. I would have liked it better in color though. good luck in the challenge. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/01/2003 12:53:02 AM |
| Ahhhh. Love the details and contrast on this one. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/30/2003 11:07:45 PM |
| mini-me? good use of b&w, i love the texture of the cloth around the feet. good focus and detail. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/30/2003 03:23:38 PM |
| Great idea, well executed. |
|
|
|
04/30/2003 11:52:25 AM |
| I just can\\\'t resist feet shots. Very nice composition. Focus is a little off, but nice nonetheness. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/30/2003 07:04:33 AM |
| Now that was a good idea for a transportation photo! So simple but with so much inpact, and it works very well in B&W. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2025 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 03/12/2025 09:48:03 AM EDT.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
