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Oh well! This will have to do. To the tunnel.
Oh well! This will have to do. To the tunnel.
bcoble


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Challenge: Leading Lines II (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Panasonic DMC-FZ20
Location: Springfield
Date: Jun 25, 2005
Galleries: Cityscape, Urban
Date Uploaded: Jun 26, 2005

 Taken at a local school while letting the dogs run and play.





Re-looked at image-Do not like but gave up. Oh well

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Place: 256 out of 275
Avg (all users): 4.4615
Avg (commenters): 4.0000
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Views since voting: 569
Views during voting: 306
Votes: 234
Comments: 8
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/01/2005 06:15:08 PM
I feel that the out-of-focus foreground is a little overpowering.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/30/2005 10:35:11 PM
The bar leads to the tunnel very well but this picture doesn't POP for me. Maybe if a child were in it.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/30/2005 01:32:36 AM
My advice is to hold yourself to a higher standars. Never submit a photo that "will have to do."
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/29/2005 08:30:15 PM
I know this is part of a playground structure but the photo doesnt tell me so, nor does it obscure what it is enough to make it intriguing. What is the leading line? the pole over the suspension bridge? what does it lead me to look at? the bolts holding it on? the hump that I know to be a tunnel slide but doesnt look like one? why? why do you want me to look at the tunnel? Also the sun is very high in the sky wich makes lighting very difficult, the yellows all seem overexposed.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/29/2005 07:27:49 AM
The note of desperation in the title does not inspire confidence. The leading lines I find weak. Nothing bad about the pic it just doesn't do much for me
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/27/2005 06:23:40 PM
Not sure what is supposed to be a leading line here. A more interesting image may have been looking up the slide tube at a kid at the top getting ready to slide like superman. the colors are good.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/27/2005 11:02:43 AM
try not to sell your self short, especially in the title :) you've got a lot of available lines in this structure...next time try to think more abstractly. from what i see available i would have liked to see something done with just the chains and that handrail. get close and focus tight so the distracting elements of the background are blurred.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 06/27/2005 12:32:07 AM
The texture on the floor of this structure is very interesting and I feel would give the image more impact as the focal point. Right idea though with the hand rails.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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