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07/08/2005 12:14:15 AM |
**critique club**
great job on this shot. a macro AND a leading line to boot.
this photo has a very appealing composition to it. coloring is great (although a true black and white with some more contrast and, perhaps, noise would be fun to see too).
other than trying some different color variations, i don't know what else i can do to help you improve upon this. it's really well-done. |
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07/03/2005 11:54:24 PM |
| Nice use on the shallow dof. Cool image, and good luck (ends in 6 minutes!) |
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07/03/2005 12:35:16 AM |
| excellent old time feel. technique and tone is perfect in my mind. almost too good as the exceptional focus seems to highlight a bit of fuzz at the end of the third ring. |
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07/02/2005 10:22:49 AM |
| There seem to be some spots of dust in the in-focus portion of the picture. Perhaps these could be cloned out, as I feel that simplicity is a strong point here and the dust spoils that a bit. |
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07/02/2005 07:59:38 AM |
| Good lighting and composition. Nice use of shallow DOF. |
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07/02/2005 06:07:25 AM |
| One of my favourites so far. Hope you get a ribbon. |
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07/02/2005 05:32:35 AM |
| ringbinder, simple and effective Great work. |
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07/02/2005 03:25:57 AM |
| Interesting, would work better in an abstract challenge, but great picture. |
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07/01/2005 05:59:31 PM |
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06/30/2005 10:19:04 PM |
| Took me a minute to figure out what this was, and now that I have, I think it's an even more interesting photo. I like the unusual viewpoint, and I love the DOF that you've chosen. Very nice. |
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06/28/2005 09:09:23 PM |
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06/28/2005 12:04:12 PM |
Ooooh I hate those machines! Can never get them to work properly. Probably too much paper.
As for the photo. I like the abstractness of it. Somehpow missing a subject though. The eye goes in & gets lost. |
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