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07/09/2005 12:59:00 AM |
*Greetings from the Critique Club*
First things first... Her expression is wonderful! There are a few things that I feel take away from this shot in general. One is the foliage in the front and the second is the buildings. This is a nice capture and it evokes a great feeling of happiness. For me, there are no leading lines. There is nothing that draws your eye into any directions. My eye goes directly to the cute little girl and stops. Maybe one way that this set-up could have worked better would be to reposition yourself where the distractions are not so visible, and to have the girl position her body where SHE is the leading line, of course she would need to be directed to a certain point in the shot that is interesting to the eye also.
Overall, I like your picture. It has no flaws or technical no-no's. I hope that this critique was helpful.
Mandy |
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07/03/2005 09:19:23 PM |
| very unique border idea. i wish you had gone darker in the upper left corner |
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07/03/2005 08:42:42 PM |
| Dang... the lines don't really work for me, but this is an awesome shot! |
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07/03/2005 06:19:23 PM |
| nice timing here, and loving how sharp she is. it's too bad the house was in the background, though. |
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07/02/2005 12:45:16 PM |
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07/02/2005 06:08:59 AM |
| line? nice pic though, just think the structure behind is not ideal for background to this otherwise excellent pic. Next time do this pic with a neutral background and see the diffs. |
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07/01/2005 09:32:49 PM |
| I love the pose, and it's a great motion capture, but I'm just not sure about the foliage. From this angle and with this amount of blur, it just looks like overgrown weeds. This would have been great if it had been a picket fence or something similar instead of the weeds. |
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07/01/2005 01:11:05 PM |
Frelsi:)
Nice sommer feeling here. The sticks infront of here are littel bit distracting and the background is not so great but the expression on here and the momment of capture is truly perfect.... i dont care to much about this frame but that´s a taste thing... 8 |
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07/01/2005 03:15:29 AM |
| Although the vegetation forms lines, it really doesn't lead to the subject. My eyes were immediately drawn to the girl before I even noticed the vegetation. |
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06/29/2005 05:00:28 PM |
| WHAT a cool photo!!!! What a pose! I just love this!!!! |
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06/28/2005 07:11:27 PM |
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06/28/2005 04:46:26 AM |
| Great capture. A bit over-exposed. But the plants in the front just get in the way, and don't lead the eye into (or out of) the picture. |
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06/28/2005 01:38:29 AM |
LOVE the colors in this photo. I think it may have been even better if the foliage in the foreground was in focus as well, and the house in the bkg was not. Probably a hard shot to get though :)
I love the expression on her face, it makes me happy. |
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06/27/2005 08:08:50 PM |
| Image is great but I don't see leading lines as compositional technique. |
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