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05/08/2003 05:04:41 PM |
*Critique Club*
FIRST IMPRESSION: Great theme, outstanding macros, but that red spot is distracting.
CHALLENGE: Meets the challenge.
COMPOSITION: The composition of the individual shots and the group is excellent. Given the editing rules were suspended for this challenge I wonder if you could have altered to color of the red spot on the leaf in Photoshop. It keeps pulling my eye back from anything else I want to loo at.
TECHNICAL: The technical aspects of these shots are excellent. I like the short depth of field and the exposure is outstanding.
CONCLUSION: a strong composition, and deserving of it's 6+ score.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in future challenges! |
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05/04/2003 11:45:56 PM |
| I saw a green fly today. it looked evil! nice captures here.. focus could be sharper, but lighting is great |
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05/04/2003 11:42:15 PM |
| these are really sharp... |
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05/04/2003 01:05:13 PM |
| Great macros.....what's the story? |
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05/03/2003 05:28:34 PM |
| The top images would look better if they were the same height. It kills the balance and symmetry by making the right side jut out into the bottom shot. |
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05/02/2003 09:41:28 AM |
| The way how you captured the different flyes work very well. The different sizes of the photos brings quite a lot of appeal to the photo. |
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05/02/2003 05:50:00 AM |
Nice images but I don't like the way that the top right image cuts into the lower image.
That red spot the yellow fly is stepping into also isn't appealing.
Lastly, wondering what the pinky beigy background is on the right side of the lower image?
Definitely an interesting collection, but layout not strong for me. |
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05/01/2003 07:33:50 PM |
| wo Excellent close-ups. I love bug shots. Looks like the top bug drank too much blood and vomitted. lol. Good job. Beautiful colours. Jacko. 9 |
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04/30/2003 08:49:45 PM |
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04/30/2003 12:52:44 PM |
| I like each individual photo, but the composition of the three is a bit jarring. The color you captured is incredible. |
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04/30/2003 11:56:15 AM |
| i don't understand why you didn't crop out a bit of the top of the right picture and have an even break between the top pictures and the bottom picture . . . everything else is very well done. |
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04/29/2003 02:03:07 PM |
| Gorgeous use of depth of field, lovely sharp capture. I'd love to know what that blood red spot is. |
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04/29/2003 10:12:26 AM |
| Three fine photos...I think a little tighter crop on each and more black space would strengthen the overall composition. |
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04/29/2003 08:04:38 AM |
| Brilliant! Well-captured images and good layout. The red blob makes me cringe a bit! |
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04/28/2003 04:37:32 PM |
| Very nicely done! The flies aren't quite perfect, but darn close. I like your idea very much and love the bright colored flies. 10 Rob the Swash |
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04/28/2003 07:53:18 AM |
| Nice arrangement of very good pictures the strong green in each view really works |
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