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Cellular Victim
Cellular Victim
rbenny


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Obsolete (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Canon PowerShot A510
Location: Zichron Yaakov, Israel
Date: Jun 24, 2005
Date Uploaded: Jun 28, 2005

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Place: 424 out of 453
Avg (all users): 3.9776
Avg (commenters): 2.6667
Avg (participants): 3.8571
Avg (non-participants): 4.1240
Views since voting: 628
Views during voting: 341
Votes: 268
Comments: 10
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07/04/2005 12:57:55 PM
There is some distracting object on the left edge that should be cropped. The picture is washed out probably from the time of day you shot it so you should rework the saturation, and levels.
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07/04/2005 08:21:52 AM
lighting is a bit boring in this one, but deffinatly obsolete
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07/02/2005 11:49:41 AM
seems grainy. I would have crop'd more off the left. what's the blur on the far left?
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07/01/2005 03:47:43 PM
This shot has a lot of noise in it which does not work for this shot. I do not see the need to bump up the ISO when it appears that it was a bright sunny day. Not sure what is happening on the left side of the shot also. 3
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06/30/2005 11:44:39 PM
Was it taken through the glass? It doesn't seem to be in sharp focus. Lots of distracting background elements too.
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06/30/2005 12:14:29 AM
This is a good idea but the picture is very noisy. It looks like you might have cropped a small piece out of a big picture.
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06/29/2005 02:41:12 PM
The composition includes so many distracting elements and the main subject (the phone) looks out of focus. I would suggest simplifying the shot to just the telephone and maybe a little space around it on one side or the other for an off-centered composition.
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06/29/2005 12:26:52 PM
Like the idea, but this image is a bit too noisy.
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06/29/2005 09:32:41 AM
Blurred.
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06/29/2005 08:55:58 AM
looks very much like a snapshot to me. Basic rule of composition - if it does not add to the picture, leave it out. - the entire background is distracting, and the thing on the left looks -almost like a car mirror-needs cropped out. Go in tighter next time, perhaps a different angle and the phone itself is about a stop underexposed.
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