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05/11/2003 11:26:18 PM |
*Critique Club*
FIRST IMPRESSION: Good framing and combination, great action shots, but the size limitations probably hurt you a bit here.
CHALLENGE: Meets the challenge.
COMPOSITION: Excellent composition in the individual photographs and the overall composition. The individual images are a bit small and you could have given yourself more room to work with by going top to bottom.
TECHNICAL: Given the range you had to work with (probably in excess of 5 stops from tehe black nose to the white fur) you did quite well with the exposure. You may have been able to keep the shutter open for just a touch longer, but this is certainly closer to perfect than I could have gotten it
CONCLUSION: A great series of shts, it's a shame this didn't score higher.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in future challenges! |
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05/02/2003 09:04:19 AM |
| Nice non-intrusive framing in this grouping. |
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05/02/2003 05:56:05 AM |
| Good display of motion. I think they're all just a touch underexposed, but its one of the better displays of triptych in the challenge. |
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05/01/2003 07:47:35 PM |
| Great action scene. He certainly seems to be enjoying himself. Jacko. 8 |
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04/30/2003 12:00:59 PM |
| very nicely done and set up (although the alignment of the right photo is a bit off). the focus seems a bit soft on the photos, but the essence of the photos comes out clearly making it a fun set to view. |
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04/29/2003 10:28:15 PM |
| Great picture! This really captures this bear's personality and how much fun he's having. The wter splashes are good. A 10 |
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04/28/2003 12:38:13 PM |
Or maybe your bear is saying "Dang, it's hot, and I wish I were back home..."
You captured a glorious animal. I hope s/he got comfortable. |
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04/28/2003 10:43:43 AM |
| Nicely done. It would be interesting to see the full-sized version. The size rules for the challenge make it difficult to get the detail of the photos. |
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