Hello from the Critique Club,
Your entry meets the challenge. The photo is a bit grainy, the white of the truck, in particular, doesn't look too good. Focus, also, is a bit soft. You might want to work on that. The cars in the background, the white parking lot line, and the car (?) popping up over the truck to the top left are distracting. I think that, to show off this truck, it would be a better idea to have it be the only subject in the photo.
As a whole, this entry is more like a personal snapshot than like something to hang on the wall. Even though the picture may be interesting and meaningful to you, there isn't much of interest for others here - nothing much that "sells" it.
Take care,
Ursula A. |