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07/13/2005 11:47:24 PM |
*Critique Club*
This is different. I think that the reason you received low scores is because it lacks "oomph". You know what I mean? Water drops are a great choice for the challenge. I like the way you incorporated the reflections into the title. I am not sure which came first, the title or the reflections, but whatever it works. Your drops are not in focus. The smaller one in the front is bumpy on the sides. There is a blue haze on both drops (that maybe intentional) that is distracting. I think that if your going to take a picture of a reflection it needs to be in focus as well. Especially on a macro shot. I only see one lamp in focus. The other reflections look so blurry. Overall--I think that your intentions were good but you needed a better set-up for this shot.
I hope this was helpful. Good luck in future challenges, not that you need it because you get pretty good scores!
Mandy |
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07/10/2005 11:14:57 PM |
Interesting abstract. I don't feel much from it however. |
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07/10/2005 07:07:20 PM |
Fascinating shot - very unusual and would look great as a huge poster in a bar. Tops. |
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07/09/2005 09:52:52 PM |
Title is to long for me and the focus is hard to find. |
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07/09/2005 02:36:12 AM |
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07/08/2005 11:22:31 AM |
Oh man this is great... If only you could of used diffuses lighting so you wouldn't get that reflection! But great over all!
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07/07/2005 10:41:39 AM |
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07/06/2005 12:19:36 PM |
Very creative, and abstract. I like it, but I am guessing the voters don't (stupid voters). |
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07/06/2005 10:54:41 AM |
Great colors and shape. I just wish something was sharp for my eye to go to. |
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07/05/2005 08:23:34 AM |
Special prize for making me look longer than any other entry so far. It's a pointless sort of idea, which of course I like very much! It would be much diminished without the excellent title. As an abstract, it's got an appealing, organic sort of feel to it. 7 |
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07/04/2005 03:37:22 PM |
Interesting colours and reflections. Composition overall, with large drop above, doesn't quite work for me. |
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07/04/2005 09:51:28 AM |
Base: 5
Tech: +2
Subj:+1
Chln:
Total: 8
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07/04/2005 01:05:52 AM |
i cant spot the 4th lamp! |
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