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05/13/2003 11:52:26 PM |
*Critique Club*
FIRST IMPRESSION: THought it was a bicycle tire until I noticed the outside part of the wheel. Once I saw that the hand made sense.
CHALLENGE: Meets the challenge.
COMPOSITION: Composition is excellent. I wonder if shooting from a little bit to the side might have helped the voters realize what this was though. I don't think the voters were able to get enough context in the short time the average voter typically spends on a photograph.
TECHNICAL: Technical aspects are excellent. I like the short depth of field.
CONCLUSION: A very good image, but one that I think would need to be approached slightly differently for the voters to grasp. Remember, most voters spend only a few seconds per image when voting.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in future challenges! |
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05/05/2003 01:48:07 PM |
| This image is out of focus and seems a little plain. It also needs to be sharpened some. I think maybe if you photographed the whole bike wheel instead of just the tire, it would have added a lot more value to the image. |
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05/04/2003 08:08:11 AM |
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05/02/2003 10:21:00 PM |
| Good concept, but a lot of digital noise in this image, plus, the focus isn't really crisp. |
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05/02/2003 04:24:21 PM |
| Deserves a price for what it says. Technically, it might benefit from less contrast. |
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05/02/2003 10:27:57 AM |
| I like the DOF, though I think I would have set the focus on the part of the tire closest to the front...hand in the background is distracting. |
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05/01/2003 08:50:40 PM |
I don't know what else to say, it's just cool. The hand makes the picture.
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04/30/2003 10:09:48 PM |
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04/30/2003 04:49:29 PM |
| I like the concept and the image is strong..... just think it needs to be sharper..... maybe with the grain it might have come up better in black and white with a bit more contrast.... |
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04/30/2003 03:37:01 PM |
| Shouldn't that be ENabled? |
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04/30/2003 12:08:03 AM |
| Excellent use of macro! Too bad about the noise. Also, it seems like it would be more worthwhile had it been centered in the shot. |
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