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07/11/2005 09:24:18 PM |
I like your concept and composition a lot. Just a couple of quick ideas: If you could have removed the flag it would have been better I think it interrupts the line from the unbrella. Colors are just a little dull, maybe some curves or something to make them pop a little more. But good idea, nice execution |
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07/11/2005 12:47:59 PM |
Beautiful sunset! Great colors. |
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07/10/2005 04:23:18 PM |
Neat idea, but the color temperature of your flash is all wrong. Flashes tend to burn at 5,600 Kelvin. That setting sun is burning around 1,000ish Kelvin. You need to put some type of orange gel over you fill flash, and you have a much more realistic photo. |
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07/10/2005 02:21:55 AM |
nicely exposed to me there is too much empty space on the left. You could crop at the boat and still be asymetrical. |
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07/07/2005 09:38:01 AM |
the photo could have been a little bit more artistic...in thie case, it pretty much looks like an instant! |
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07/07/2005 12:51:27 AM |
good capture with the sunset. right timing with haze. colorful umbrella compliments the sky |
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07/06/2005 05:07:01 AM |
This picture really has a nice ambiance, I wish you could see the whole umbrella for more of a circular feel. |
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07/06/2005 12:30:08 AM |
I suppose that the umbrella is the subjuct here although the sun seems more circley. The lighting (flash?) doesn't seem to work here to me. It's nice and clear though and I like the composition. |
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