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05/13/2003 08:09:01 PM |
| Interesting glass set. The composition does not show them at their best. I suggest a tighter shotand stronger lighting. |
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05/13/2003 02:23:54 PM |
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05/13/2003 10:59:19 AM |
| What an interesting shade of red glass! I probably would have tried to have kept the whole tray in the image, you've cropped off just a little on the right there. |
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05/11/2003 11:14:19 PM |
| distracting reflections around the tray and i would try different lighting for the red subject, maybe another surface and lighting from underneath or behind. |
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05/10/2003 07:38:16 PM |
| Unfortunately I do not find these glass items particularly eye catching. I think excluding the jug, might have improved the composition. Would also have tried to have kept out he wood edge bottom left. Srangley enough, what really does attract my attention are the reflections on the left, which look like legs, which might have made a better subject. |
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05/08/2003 03:11:09 AM |
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05/07/2003 09:49:53 PM |
| I would prefer to see one with a sharper focus. The colours look a bit saturated, some buffing up on the hue will help. |
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05/07/2003 11:56:12 AM |
| A few observations: it's a little out of focus; you've cropped a fraction of the tray which looks accidental; using a table as a backdrop creates diverging lines since you've squared the tray with the camera - if you have to use that sort of backdrop, don't forget that it has to be inharmony as well (not necessarily in line, it just needs to work with your subject); the glass table has both reflections and silhouettes of things underneath which is a bit distracting in my opinion. Sorry if this seems long-winded, but lots of people have been saying they're looking for constructive criticism, so that's what i was going for. good luck. Pedro |
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