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07/17/2005 04:44:49 PM |
Not a bad idea, to photograph a family buisness but this photo doesn´t really work in that regard as I have no clue on what the family buisness is after seeing this. What I am suggesting is that next time you take a step back and try an environmental portrait approach and show what it is that they are doing. I can´t tell if they are bagging groceries, sewing, wrapping a brand new 1Ds mkII in gift paper for your special someone or writing a nobel prize book
Also the image quality isn´t very good, there are a couple of very ood lines that lead through the lady in the bottom left corners face and over the yellow t-shirt and there doesn´t seem to be any one point in this shot that is spot on in focus.
Gave the shot a 4. |
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07/17/2005 05:02:04 AM |
| I don't personally care for the soft focus, but it works alright here; the fact that the bag is fairly sharp makes it look like the blur wasn't intentional, which does detract from the shot. I'd have voted this higher if the girl's frontal lobe hadn't been sheared off by the edge of the frame. |
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07/15/2005 07:11:57 PM |
| Its a cool photo...reminds me of a place I used to eat at alot, but I wish it werent quite so soft. |
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07/14/2005 12:40:40 PM |
| focus poor dislike crop but lovely idea and colour |
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07/12/2005 10:56:47 PM |
Subject Impact: High
Meets Challenge: Average
Technical: Low
Composition: Average
Creativity: Average
Score: 5 |
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07/12/2005 03:46:27 PM |
| In this case the shot is quite soft but, I like it ... I also like the subtle blend of colors ... I would have liked the shot not to include the plastic bag though ... |
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07/12/2005 02:03:38 PM |
Fit to challenge criteria: 2 /2
Contrast/Colors: 1/2
Photo Quality: 1/2
Composition: 1/2
My subjective affinity: 0/2 |
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07/12/2005 09:58:55 AM |
| love this shot, I've always admired how Asian families work so hard to make a better life for future generations of their children. This shot captures it :) |
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07/11/2005 08:32:52 PM |
| Wish you hadn't cut her off at the forehead. |
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07/11/2005 08:12:54 PM |
| Little soft for me although I know you intended it that way, and that I respect. You creativity is showing up well. good job. |
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07/11/2005 12:41:13 PM |
| I like the soft focus here. Tells a nice story about family working together. |
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07/11/2005 04:27:44 AM |
| would have liked a clearer shot - too blurry |
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07/11/2005 12:51:05 AM |
| Excellent photo. Composition is very good. Color saturation, too. Well meets the challenge. Diminished by overly soft focus/DOF. |
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07/11/2005 12:19:02 AM |
| I like the soft focus and texture. Like they are lost in a blur of work! Nice colors and the lighting on her shoulder is good. |
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