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05/18/2003 08:47:49 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club };-)
Initial thoughts
Very interesting composition, a stretch to meet the challenge, well done composition.
Composition/ Content
I REALLY love the shot, IMHO by far your best shot that you've submitted so far. That being said, I think it failed miserably for this challenge. If this was a postcard it would scare all of the tourists away. Great composition although I would like to see a little more land below the flower.'
Technical
Focus is dead on and I really like the shallow depth of field. The low color is excellent and I wonder if you desaturated some. For another challenge you would have really made a killer shot.
My Opinion On The Photo
I originally scored this shot a four bordering on a five. I think that it is an awesome shot but fails miserably at meeting the challenge. Good job on the photo though, and keep up the good work.
I would be happy to talk further about this shot if you would like to contact me.
DougPaz
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05/11/2003 08:58:36 PM |
| I am not sure if I would buy this postcard? :) |
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05/11/2003 02:13:34 PM |
| I'd trim some of the sky to make the shape more postcard-like. |
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05/10/2003 10:27:52 PM |
| Different, I like your colors and comp |
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05/10/2003 12:21:11 PM |
| Nice photo, I'm not sure I'd buy it as a card to send or to remind me of a place. |
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05/09/2003 01:16:42 PM |
| This is a wildly well done photo! I'm having a hard time seeing this as a postcard, maybe a greeting card (sympathy - don't be down...sort of thing). The focus and composition are wonderful! 6 Rob the Swash |
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05/08/2003 12:10:34 PM |
| This is very artistic. I love the mood of this shot, but not sure it'd make the best postcard. If it'd been in the Flora challenge I wouldn've given it a 9 or 10. |
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05/08/2003 09:10:13 AM |
| Excellent shot, the color of the flower is a great contrast to the black/gray tones. Flawless - a 10. |
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05/08/2003 01:07:57 AM |
| This is a good picture - I'm not sure how good of a postcard it is. It doesn't look appealing - with the one flower bent over and stuff. |
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05/07/2003 03:22:23 PM |
| Gorgeous image, but not very postcardy, I'm afraid. What it really looks like is one of those Successories or 'Despair.com' motivational posters. |
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05/07/2003 01:18:32 PM |
| Great shot - but postcard? There was a requirement to be relevant to your location in the challenge, and this could be anywhere. Still a great photo, but not as it stands for this challenge. |
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05/07/2003 11:34:35 AM |
| GREAT picture....but it doesn't meet the challenge. I know, I know. You've already heard that but it's true. |
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05/06/2003 07:57:57 PM |
| Vey interesting colour scheme. Did you desaturate some colours? Very neat. |
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05/06/2003 10:43:39 AM |
| I like this image a lot you have composed it very well. The yellows contrast very well against the bland background. This would make an excellent postcard. From your title, and the lack of a description on your postcard I am not sure what or where it really is. Is this promoting the area you live in? If so I need more information - 7. |
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05/06/2003 10:28:04 AM |
| Then why do my pampered plants die? |
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05/06/2003 07:56:12 AM |
| I like the photo but i cant see what it has to do with postcards? Good look anyway |
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05/06/2003 06:07:00 AM |
| This is a great macro, but i fail to comprehend how it can be a postcard. |
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05/05/2003 05:03:24 PM |
| Great catch, but not very much of a postcard representing your city or state, or is it? |
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05/05/2003 12:31:18 PM |
| Great concept. would look ever better with B&W for everything except the flowers. |
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05/05/2003 08:48:06 AM |
| postcard? not a standard format for a postcard, from where? really nice shot though but I can't see the challenge topic here. |
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