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05/19/2003 12:32:02 AM |
Well, I'm glad I have this image to critique because I liked it a lot.
I love the abstract nature of this shot. You focused on shapes, colors and reflections. I think this is all glass is about so it was definitely a good move. All those are emphasized by the close-up compostion you chose. Very well done.
The exposure is perfect, allowing to show all those great tones and variations of green. Not too much detail using this reduced DOF: this emphasizes the shapes, I like it.
Maybe less graininess would have been better: it doesn't relly fit the theme of glass. I don't know if it came from your processing. Anyway, This is pretty much all I can think of to improve this shot you perfectly executed.
Congratulations, and Good luck for your future entries.
The Critique Club |
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05/13/2003 02:49:35 PM |
Gorgeous green. Nice macro adds an abstract feel. Focus on the front edge of the glasses seems a tad soft maybe. |
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05/13/2003 02:07:45 PM |
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05/13/2003 11:40:09 AM |
i like the use of bright colors in this image, it really makes it stand out. good work 5 |
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05/12/2003 05:47:31 PM |
Lovely! Simple geometric curves and intersectiond with a wonderful use of reflections. Really shows the glass off beautifully.
8, Kavey |
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05/10/2003 09:09:13 AM |
Nice colorful curves, and good color. I feel it would be more effective if less centered and a little more exposure to reduce the grain. Not a bad job though. 5 |
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05/10/2003 01:05:57 AM |
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05/09/2003 08:08:14 AM |
Good take !! Good idea of posing the glasses 5 |
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05/09/2003 06:43:45 AM |
Simple. Effective. I don't like the colour, personally, but I do like your execution. |
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05/08/2003 11:22:33 AM |
the green in the border competes with the image, let the green glasses speak for themselves |
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05/08/2003 10:41:30 AM |
Beautiful greeny/yellow tones. The cropping is also very effective, good luck in the challenge - Gary. |
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05/08/2003 03:46:33 AM |
A little imagination here, which is refreshing for this challenge, good colors, good focus and good composition. Did you use a macro? |
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05/07/2003 07:25:01 PM |
A bit to grainy but great colors |
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05/07/2003 04:51:12 PM |
the green is beautiful... I also love the interlocking glass rims... beautiful shot :) - setzler |
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05/07/2003 12:54:21 PM |
Nice effect..... personally, I think the border detracts.... perhaps a simple black border would have worked better..... good luck, Todd. |
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05/07/2003 11:57:54 AM |
i like the converging greens - did you cheat them with PS or is that natural? i like it either way. |
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05/07/2003 12:22:14 AM |
green!!!!!! (cool shot too, i like the position of the glasses) though I think you could do without the green part of the border.. its a bit thick, the black alone would look nice. |
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