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07/31/2005 09:15:15 PM |
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07/30/2005 09:11:18 PM |
A very refreshing and creative approach to the challenge. A nice clean purposeful composition. A slight suggestion for improvement, maybe show more of the man's face. There is such a great expression on the boy, so intense and focused on the job at hand, I think if you could see the man's face as well would really help drive the story. |
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07/30/2005 08:47:03 AM |
Subject Impact: Nice visual impact
Meets Challenge: Meets Challenge
Technical: OK
Composition: Good
Creativity: OK
Score: 5 |
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07/29/2005 03:57:41 PM |
Nice choice of subject.
I think having both subjects faces visible would've been nice. Or maybe a close up on the action, with the large and small hands both visible.
Good job though! |
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07/29/2005 01:45:00 PM |
Nice picture of a tender moment as one passes on their trade to the young generation. Although I would have liked to see more of Grandpa's face and what they were making, you have captured the moment well. |
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07/29/2005 12:12:57 PM |
Both faces of concentration would be really great to see. I'd love more contrast - push those blacks all the way to black and you'll have a stronger photo |
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07/28/2005 03:46:59 PM |
Interesting, but lacking the face of the teacher |
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07/28/2005 01:28:59 AM |
No safety glasses....tsk, tsk nice picture though |
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07/27/2005 04:47:51 PM |
nice capture. Good to see some wood working, and the memories / bonding that is happening here is priceless. Would have been better if the man's face wasn't hidden. |
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07/27/2005 01:59:35 PM |
The light is very flat in this shot |
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07/26/2005 07:49:00 PM |
I like the idea but would prefer to see a little more of the tutor's face. A tad bit more contrast would help bring out some of the more subtle detail aswell. |
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07/26/2005 07:05:17 PM |
Very family oriented photo. Would have liked to see a closer view of the spinning wood. |
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07/26/2005 10:40:39 AM |
I Like the shot, but where are the safety glasses on the boy? |
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07/26/2005 05:11:32 AM |
would have liked to have seen the wood in color |
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07/26/2005 03:30:14 AM |
This one would be perfect for tools of the trade as well. Nice and meaningful image |
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07/25/2005 09:18:24 PM |
please put some safety glasses on the lad.......10 |
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07/25/2005 03:27:16 PM |
would have been cool to see grandpas face too, maybe this could use a bit more contrast also thoose face shadows are often a pain, But I know you probably couldnt move them, its a good moment |
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07/25/2005 01:04:26 PM |
He's not wearing protective glasses. Tsk tsk. Good photo, though! |
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07/25/2005 11:17:53 AM |
I like this a lot, but the Health and Safety people may be after you for lack of eye protection |
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07/25/2005 10:32:59 AM |
cute shot, since the challenge was advanced editing i think someo dodging and burning would have added more depth to this shot. |
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