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05/22/2003 07:59:26 AM |
Critique Club
Well, I'm going to go against the grain and I really don't like this shot, and more that I really don't understand the lighting compliments - seems to me to be very harsh, very very front-on giving those odd shadows immendiately behind the falls of paint. Given the great way you use light in your other photos i'm quite susprised you liked this enough to submit it.
That said, the other elements are fine - focus excellent, but there's a perspective issue with the falls of paint themselves, and the bubbling and intermixing of the paint is too chaoticc for my taste.
Of course, this is all just my opinion, and given that it scored higher than any shot I've ever submitted I'm not sure how much attention you'll want to pay to that in terns of challenges :-)
Ed
PS. A little later ... there isn't a system tat I know of for saying 'can't do this critique' through the critique club. I'm not really happy about what I've said - or perhaps the way I've said it - but if I didn't get something written I'd be at a stop.
Message edited by author 2003-05-22 10:23:11. |
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05/18/2003 03:31:42 PM |
| A creative idea resulting in wonderful patterns. |
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05/16/2003 06:34:14 AM |
| You only had one try at getting this one right huh? The idea is very good. The paint streams look like knitting needles somehow. Well done. |
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05/15/2003 11:36:49 PM |
| Nice action shot...how many tries did it take/ The colors are very good, except the black could have been richer. Lighting is good also. |
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05/15/2003 02:26:00 AM |
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05/14/2003 10:44:57 AM |
| Very, very good idea and very well executed. This could be our winner! :-) 10! |
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05/13/2003 11:05:02 PM |
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05/13/2003 02:40:07 PM |
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05/12/2003 11:18:53 PM |
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05/12/2003 10:56:44 PM |
| Good job getting the lighting right! This must have been tough to do because the paint is flowing (hopefully not onto the floor) :D Great! |
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05/12/2003 08:58:35 PM |
| I like the spacing between the pouring colors. The contrast with the black background really adds effect to the photograph. |
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05/12/2003 02:52:34 PM |
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05/12/2003 02:44:12 PM |
| unique shot.....way to go!! |
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05/12/2003 04:02:16 AM |
| great - brought on a smile |
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05/12/2003 12:33:05 AM |
| Oh nice!!!!!!!!! I love this shot! 10+ I have tried pouring liquid shots - they are NOT easy - congrats on a great shot. |
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05/12/2003 12:12:34 AM |
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