FROM THE CRITIQUE CLUB
First Impression: Great title. Nice pattern (repetitions).
Technical: Focus is a bit soft. Lighting is OK, but the reflections (flash?) on the pink chair are distracting.
Composition: Pretty good. I think you cropped a bit too tight, especially at the top - I think it would be good to include the full sweep of the chairs' back. I like the repeating "3s" throughout the photo. IMO the colours are a bit harsh to the eyes. Also IMO, I think it would have been nice to have a different coloured background (grey or white or black, not greenish).
Overall: It's an interesting idea, and it could be a striking picture, but it needs some refining to make it real good.
Ursula (uabresch)
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