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07/28/2006 04:29:17 AM |
Wow! This is simply wonderful and rates very high of being different. This kind of creativity is rare as DPC ruins you with steriotype thinking :) I really like the choice of subject, the message being communicated and the cropping of the photo. The only thing which I might like here is bit more of highlightes. I'd still like it to be lowkey, but a bit more of contrast will enhance the curves and contours on wonderful body. Lovely photo. |
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08/25/2005 01:20:39 PM |
I don't understand voting! This is one of the best images. I'm reading 'Communication Arts' Photography Annual 46 and this image reminds me of something I would see in it. People may be right when they say a little more white on the piano keys-but not too much. Maybe you could experiment with turning the piano a bit so the lines are perpendicular to her beautiful upright form. By the way, whoever she is she has a beautiful back and shoulders. / end of essay
Message edited by author 2005-08-25 13:27:21. |
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08/24/2005 06:06:00 AM |
Good start Isi...
Hope to see more of your work here!
Take care... |
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08/23/2005 11:07:14 PM |
dramatic. something special about this one |
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08/22/2005 05:54:51 PM |
To dark for me, I understand the "moonlight part", just dosen't appeal to me. 5 |
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08/22/2005 07:08:59 AM |
You have mastered perfectly here the thing that is most dificult to me: light. I love the low key aspect of it. Awinner in my huble oppinion. |
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08/21/2005 09:02:22 PM |
I like the composition of the photo, but for my taste it's a bit on the dark side. If there was a greater contrast or a bit more light I would have scored it higher. |
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08/21/2005 06:53:36 PM |
This is just beautiful, very sensual. And a slight blue tinge to it as well... moonlight? |
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08/21/2005 04:29:02 PM |
A very nice study. Bumping up. |
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08/20/2005 10:24:30 AM |
i like it but its not live |
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08/20/2005 07:30:42 AM |
Nice. This would have done very well in the "Nude" Challenge. Very tasteful. I am sure it will do well here too. |
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08/20/2005 05:08:21 AM |
Cool mood that you've captured here. |
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08/20/2005 12:16:31 AM |
Beautiful lighting. Captivating. |
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08/18/2005 04:26:40 PM |
very creative! i hope this photo places! 10 from me. |
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08/18/2005 03:18:42 PM |
I like this pic and its feeling a lot. But, however, I think it would been even better with something in up right. Maybe a full moon? |
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08/18/2005 12:59:41 PM |
i like it nice idea, amazing frame, but i think it's need to be more brighter |
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08/18/2005 10:39:53 AM |
Well composed and nice lighting! 10 |
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08/18/2005 01:20:35 AM |
is she playing bach? nice back anyway |
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08/17/2005 06:35:36 PM |
I know it's suppose to be moonlight but maybe if the keys could have been made a tad brighter it would have taken the focus away from the center (i.e. her shoulder). Another thing is the background doesn't fully blend in with the piano and thus creates a bit of a distraction with the sharp line it creates. |
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08/17/2005 03:31:27 PM |
nice...but i bet this would have done better in the nudes challenge |
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08/17/2005 02:43:46 PM |
Very nice. A little bit more light would work even better; also, the model should be better positioned in relation to the keyboard (turned to the right a bit). As such, it looks not so natural. But a great pic anyway. |
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08/17/2005 12:27:41 PM |
Where do I get to see live music like this? |
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08/17/2005 11:05:28 AM |
Great idea but I think your lighting has let you down a little. I'm sure this shot was very different in your mind? The WB is slightly off and this is, unfortunately far too dark. Compositionally I would have maybe done things a little differently as well, not as much of a close crop and with the piano perpindicular to the body, if you know what I mean.
If I were you I'd persist and persist in reshooting this because I think this is a fantastic idea, good luck! :)
Alex (6) |
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08/17/2005 10:28:49 AM |
Absolutely love the subtlety! beautiful! |
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08/17/2005 07:47:48 AM |
When I first viewed this there were four spots of dust on my laptop monitor that looked like the Southern Cross and gave her something to look at. That said, this is a wonderful photograph. |
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08/17/2005 05:17:29 AM |
Two challenges with one snap! |
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08/17/2005 04:44:02 AM |
good title,graet lighting-10 ;D |
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08/17/2005 02:25:04 AM |
I find this a compelling composition, but there's just a bit too much "darkness" to it and not enough mood. I know perhaps the attempt is to hint at the subject being moonlit, but for me, the woman just blends in a bit too much into the background, and perhaps the image could benefit from a change in contrast value. 7 for the idea. |
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08/17/2005 02:03:34 AM |
Trying to get all your challenge entries done in one sitting, that's efficient. :) |
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08/17/2005 01:13:55 AM |
The lighting is very effective. |
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08/17/2005 12:58:14 AM |
play piano in the nude often? quite an interesting hobby but it kind of makes the photo a bit strange, so a 5. |
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08/17/2005 12:52:09 AM |
Heh - Nude III is the next challenge. ROFL
Nice entry. Interesting and imaginative. I'd like to see more light on her shoulder. |
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