| Author | Thread |
|
|
08/24/2005 05:34:07 PM |
Thank guys for your comments!
As for the shot itself. It is not a portrait photo. Although I'd wish to. It is a street candid shot. this girl did not know I was shooting at her at the moment.
I am still new to photography (3 months). I am sucking everything I could about photography. Some of you have given me very good critiques that I badly needed. Here I have to thank BobsterLobster for his helpful critiques. Next time, I should be able to do better. :)
Thank you all for the votes and comments, again!
Happy photography!
Message edited by author 2005-08-24 17:38:23. |
|
|
|
08/24/2005 08:59:03 AM |
| Yeah, me too. It was one of a few 10's and I stand by it. Outstanding in it's clarity and dimension!! |
|
 Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
08/24/2005 04:38:17 AM |
| I agree with BobsterLobster. It grabbed me from the first time and went already to my favs. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
|
08/22/2005 06:11:33 PM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
08/22/2005 02:29:46 PM |
| interesting. i like the flower in the hair. but the recorder seems out of place. i think a guitar would have been more appropriate with the hippie/beachy look |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
08/21/2005 01:37:08 PM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
08/21/2005 01:50:00 AM |
| Wonderful detail. This is really good!!!! It has that urban edge. She looks like a true love child. Upon 2nd review, this one still is one of my favorites. It is totally natural with no filtration - just a natural picture of a girl and her recorder. . 10 |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
08/19/2005 08:48:25 PM |
| i love the simplicity of this image... how about a selective desat? 8 |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
08/18/2005 07:51:00 PM |
| What is it that keeps bringing me back to this one?!... Her expression is great, and the simplicity is very effective. The colour and lighting is good, as is the composition. 10 |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
08/17/2005 07:01:45 PM |
| Very striking photo. The eyes are really intersting. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
08/17/2005 11:20:36 AM |
| Would have converted to B&W would have reduce the model's skin tone fluctuations |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
08/17/2005 09:36:21 AM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
08/17/2005 07:17:47 AM |
| Your subject is great, but the composition seems off... why is the recorder right by the edge of the frame, but the head has plenty of space? Surely it should be the other way round? I'm personally missing the elbows... perhaps portrait orientation? The background is terrible... how would it have looked if you got right by the wall and shot her profile without the brick wall behind her? |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
08/17/2005 01:23:39 AM |
| There are many street artist shots and yet each one has appeal. Yours is the most "bittersweet" subject. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2025 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 03/12/2025 09:48:20 AM EDT.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
