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09/01/2005 07:53:11 PM |
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08/29/2005 10:23:53 PM |
| This was a really good entry. The title and way you arranged the shot was really good. Should have placed higher! |
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08/28/2005 10:28:55 PM |
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08/28/2005 08:35:35 PM |
| Love the title and photo. Minimalistic approach. Great. |
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08/28/2005 11:46:12 AM |
| I like this. The image is more a study of light and dark than anything else. Interesting crop. |
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08/28/2005 03:29:50 AM |
| I think that the composition would be better if the model exhibited better posture. |
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08/27/2005 05:42:11 AM |
| This man's body seems out of proportion to me. Perhaps it is his position and the lighting that makes him look as if he has a massivly broad shoulder with a small head. |
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08/25/2005 11:34:51 PM |
| Nice lighting. Seems a bit out of focus. |
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08/25/2005 09:44:08 PM |
| I like the lighting of this subject. I think this photo isn't what they are looking for, for this challenge. I think it may be too dark. I hope I am wrong. Good luck. |
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08/25/2005 05:51:16 AM |
| It isn't a bad photo, just needs more to make it more interesting. There isn't realy a point of attention to draw your interest. |
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08/24/2005 08:02:17 PM |
| I like the lighting & use of negative space |
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08/24/2005 03:54:17 AM |
| Tiitle is interesting but the photo doesn't have a lot of interested. Needs something to draw views attention to it and keep it there instead of just a glance. |
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08/23/2005 10:23:52 PM |
| Nice concept, but more even lighting and greater contrast (levels/curves)might improve this image. |
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08/23/2005 09:32:29 PM |
| I like the way this just fades into darkness, the lighting appeals to me, as does the angle of the model's back and face. |
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08/23/2005 08:28:06 PM |
| good lighting, not sure of the composition though. You will undoubtedly get voted down because it is "not nude enough" I do like the image however. |
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08/23/2005 10:44:19 AM |
| Very nice skin tone. A little light on the background on camera right would have created some separation between the model and background. My monitor is calibrated and I can just see the triangle formed by the shoulder on the dark right side. I think that side is need to balance out the broadness on the other shoulder. |
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08/23/2005 06:18:36 AM |
| too much black neg space, little more outline would do good. |
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08/22/2005 11:48:03 PM |
| A very nice angle, and figure study. The border hurts it more than anything, but I think a bit different angle to level off that shoulder would have given a more pleasing angle to me. |
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08/22/2005 11:08:10 PM |
| Interesting shot. Focus should have been more on the head rather than the back IMHO. Composii\tion dosen't feel quite right either. 5 |
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08/22/2005 10:45:30 PM |
| Nice lighting. Good tonal range and and use of shadow. I think a crisper focus would take this photo over the top. As is, this is an excellent b/w! |
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08/22/2005 10:28:16 PM |
| I like the tone range across the back, though I think that maybe just a little more light on the hair would add some extra interest. I like the border here too. |
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08/22/2005 09:05:21 PM |
| decent lighting... otherwise kinda boring shot for me personally. 6 |
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08/22/2005 04:30:45 PM |
| I love this effect but it needs a little more to keep me looking at it. Maybe if it was shot on the vertical and ended at the small of the back there would be enough to keep my attention longer. Love to fade from light to black. |
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08/22/2005 03:03:06 PM |
| too blurry... lighting is good, pose seems a little awkward. |
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08/22/2005 02:47:32 PM |
| this image is a little flat - i thought it might be a bit to dark, but i dragged it into ps and pulled the curves down, and it actually needed just a little *more* shadow to pop. Funny how these things can be, but just a little darker defines the shoulder and makes the muscles more distinct. |
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08/22/2005 02:23:10 PM |
| Nice composition and lighting. |
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08/22/2005 12:44:50 PM |
| I wish this were razor sharp - it would really be an excellent shot then. The pose and use of negative space is done well. |
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08/22/2005 01:35:38 AM |
| I like the title. I like the image as well. Could be an ad for ED: "It's ok. It happens to everybody." ;-) LOL - just kiddin - sort of. |
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