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"Neo, Trinity... NOW!"
"Neo, Trinity... NOW!"
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Challenge: What is the Matrix? (Classic Editing)
Camera: Canon PowerShot G3
Location: Palermo
Date: May 16, 2003
Aperture: 2.0
ISO: 50
Shutter: 1/4
Date Uploaded: May 19, 2003

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Statistics
Place: 13 out of 140
Avg (all users): 6.1354
Avg (commenters): 6.8750
Avg (participants): 6.0482
Avg (non-participants): 6.1849
Views since voting: 1185
Votes: 229
Comments: 19
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06/01/2003 07:18:48 PM
Critique Club

Composition: You have used an extreme close up of the phone but it works well. It's fairly obvious that it is a phone and the reflection is wonderful. The background on the right side is a little distracting because it's not obvious what it is - although making it so blurred prevents it from distracting the viewer.

Technical Quality: The photo is very good from a technical stand point. Good exposure, lovely colour (very appropriate to the challenge)

Creativity: I love the subject matter - the phone is so significant in the movie and adding a character was a wonderful idea. I'm guessing it's an image from a poster or DVD cover or something similar - great idea.

Meeting the Challenge: You have easily met the challenge - the subject, title and coloring of the photo are spot on.

Overall: For only your second contribution you have done a wonderful job - well done. I look forward to your future work since this entry is so good.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/27/2003 10:54:16 AM
very nice
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05/27/2003 02:25:53 AM
File is too small, otherwise one of the better ones in this challenge.
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05/25/2003 10:12:47 PM
I like the idea of the reflection in the phone - the entrance to and exit from the Matrix. It is so narrow a crop - do you mean to suggest the difficulty of entering and exiting? - a narrow door? I think it would work better with a diffent composition revealing more of the structure of the phone.
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05/24/2003 03:41:57 PM
Good idea. Green could be a bit brighter. 6
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05/24/2003 10:56:13 AM
good one. I like the way you present the idea. Cropping works
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05/24/2003 12:46:31 AM
interesting
05/23/2003 08:23:38 AM
Very creative. Nice simple, powerfull composition. Jacko. 10
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05/23/2003 02:54:56 AM
Great shot. I love the detail and tone of green. Nice depth of field too.
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05/23/2003 01:50:20 AM
ahh excellent reflection... crop is a little tight... but not bad...
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05/22/2003 06:25:29 PM
I love the idea and choice of crop. The only glitch I think is that Trinity looks like she has an alien head LOL! Just Kidding.
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05/22/2003 12:47:53 AM
Good pic, the tight cropping is a little distracting to me, otherwise good pic
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05/21/2003 08:14:34 PM
Very cool, but you should have shown a little more of the phone. What IS showing is great!
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05/21/2003 01:36:04 PM
Really cool, good color too.
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05/21/2003 01:33:28 PM
nice idea this picture was done very nicely and the colors turned out very nice good work
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05/21/2003 08:53:33 AM
Wow - I'd believe this was actually a shot from the film itself! You don't know Carrie-Anne Moss personally, do you?

Very well done to catch such a distinct reflection on the telephone handset. Usually I don't like shots with these kind of dimensions but they work perfectly here. Even the green tint is spot-on. Very good work.
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05/21/2003 08:09:32 AM
I love the colors, I love the closeup detail... and is that really Trinity in there or a model?! Whoever it is... dead on! Awesome idea too.
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05/21/2003 08:01:16 AM
Interesting shot. Obviously relevant, but in the end just falls between abstract and representative: the background doesn't seeem to serve much purpose to me - too blurred to place the shot, too busy just to give a depth to the focus.
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05/21/2003 12:57:17 AM
The cropping makes this image so much more interesting! Nice work!
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