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06/03/2003 08:54:35 PM |
*Critique Club*
FIRST IMPRESSION: Kind of like the scrolling numbers at the beginning and end of Matrix. Natural colors, OK lighting, good level of detail.
CHALLENGE: The green helps, though this photograph meets the challenge just from it's form (shapes and such).
COMPOSITION: I like the perspective here, looking down over the heat sink towards the motherboard. The sticker visible on the memory/bios chip at the back is somewhat distracting in this photo.
TECHNICAL: Depth of field is good - just enough detail to get the point across without being too busy.
CONCLUSION: Well executed shot, with just minor imperfections.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in future challenges! |
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05/27/2003 02:07:01 PM |
| Nice image. I like the color, and pattern that you used for this image. Good job. |
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05/25/2003 06:21:23 PM |
| Great shot. Love the pattern of the heatsink(?) leading the eye across the frame. |
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05/25/2003 01:32:54 AM |
| Good use of DOF. I would rotate it counterclockwise to make the lines lead more efficiently. IMO |
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05/22/2003 11:23:43 AM |
| I like the perspective and the depth in this image. It does an excellent job of making the viewer seem almost overwhelmed with the amount, and the way it continues out of the frame suggests there are a lot more too. I believe it adequately meets the challenge. |
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05/22/2003 06:34:20 AM |
| This is very good, I love the perspective you've chosen - 9. |
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05/21/2003 05:03:14 PM |
| Just seems uninteresting. My eye leads to the RAM, but ntohing really pushes my buttons. IIf the ram is supposed to be in focus it could be sharper. |
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05/21/2003 01:40:09 PM |
| nice angle and nice way of shooting this picture it was done very nicely good work. |
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05/21/2003 08:16:24 AM |
| Lovely perspective, and awell-chosen border - brings the colours out without stifling the shot. Of what is this a picture? |
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05/21/2003 04:14:16 AM |
YEH!!
Good idéa, the deep is well done!!
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