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09/11/2005 02:25:04 AM |
Hello, and greetings from the Critique Club. I am Artyste, your critiquer for today, and you know you'll get an honest critique from me, because I don't go for the ladies :) So.. without further ado..
Initial Thoughts
Interesting, I wish I had access to cool performance shots.
Composition / Content
Not much I can say here, very dramatic. The smoke/fog/mist seems to move on its own, and the model strikes a very dynamic pose. If there's one thing I can say, it's that I, myself, generally like to see more negative space in the area that a model is looking toward, or moving toward. Having it behind the focus of the model tends to throw me off a bit, unless there's a specific reason for it. Here I suspect it's because the area in front of the model was probably filled with the crowd, equipment, or superfluous stage props.
Background
The darkness and mist combined with the lit sign really ground this image as a stage performance. A good choice, IMHO.
Camera Work / Technical
Perhaps a little too much shadow on the model, but I don't know how avoidable that was. That one shadow on her face is really distracting. Other than that, it seems that exposure and focus are dead on.
Digital Processing
The smooth look was one of the first things I noticed, but I also notice that you were using ISO 1600. Having the *ist Ds (which shares the same sensor as the D70), I'm aware that 1600, while pretty good in good light, can really start to fall apart in darker instances, so the smoothing is understandable. I'm still not fully keen on the over-all "sci-fi" look, personally. Your other PP work looks pretty good, alhough the dodging/burning in the mist is a little strong.
Fits the Challenge
This is one of the weaker links. I feel that your title both works for and against the natural connection to the challenge that your shot seems to be saying on its own. Dark & Light, Dancing Lady, Dance & Light.. are all things that jump to mind. Drama and Lyrics, however, don't seem to have much of a connection.. especially "lyrics".. at least in my mind. This probably worked against you.
My Opinion of the Photo
An interesting and fun shot, but a little over-processed in areas, and that one shadow on her face really bugs me. The negative space being on the back side puts me off to, but I understand it if it had to be used.
Good image, and one to be proud of on a personal level.
Good luck in future challenges. |
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09/04/2005 11:39:20 PM |
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09/04/2005 10:22:36 PM |
| Great shot! Love the action pose. :-) |
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09/04/2005 09:15:17 PM |
| There are a lot ofthings I don't like about this but when I look at the photo to simply appreciate it, I find it's among my favorites this challenge. The lighting, wspecially, is terrific. Title is a bit of a stretch, but who cares. |
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09/04/2005 07:25:52 PM |
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09/03/2005 08:27:07 AM |
| Strking. Nice focus - especially given the smoke. Well composed. |
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09/02/2005 06:25:57 PM |
| I think this one is stretching a bit (title). The image is pretty good. The motion blur on the model's hand is a little distracting and the pose looks very unnatural. I like the smoke and lights though. |
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09/01/2005 08:33:26 PM |
| Great image. Deserves a top 3 finish. All the light and shadow in the smoke really helps to make this photo work. |
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09/01/2005 10:31:58 AM |
| Title fits the picture well and the image is great. I thought there might be a better angle, but after really taking the image in...I like it just the way it is. Great Job. |
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09/01/2005 07:12:51 AM |
| Great shot. The sign takes a little bit away but I'll bet it was hard to avoid. |
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08/31/2005 04:59:02 AM |
| one of the best in this challenge, i really like it |
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08/30/2005 08:54:35 AM |
| Wow. I got nothing else. Perfect moment of capture. Title a little lame, but really rather irrelevent, yes? 10 - Good luck in the challenge! |
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08/30/2005 12:13:33 AM |
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08/29/2005 06:58:36 PM |
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08/29/2005 06:39:33 PM |
| Very cool, love the smoke! |
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08/29/2005 12:44:03 PM |
| Great on stage setting. I love the fog and movement. The colors are wonderful together and it really does tell the story of what's going on. 8 |
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08/29/2005 11:35:54 AM |
| good capture. a little sharper would have been nice |
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08/29/2005 10:02:20 AM |
| Very dramatic indeed. Great capture; wish there were more lead room on the left side. :) |
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