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09/12/2005 12:49:33 AM |
I almost got the brownie! :P |
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09/11/2005 01:21:05 AM |
The flower does have contrast, but think about keeping your subject off center to add interest. Centered objects prevent the eye from looking at the overall photo. |
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09/10/2005 09:48:14 AM |
The contrast is there. The use of light is good. The focus looks to be okay. I'm not at all able to get interested in the subject however. I think the gnarled background is too dark and its busy-ness takes away from the image. With the busy nature of the background that then makes me think there's too much of it showing, maybe a more judicious crop could help filter out some of that background and keep the focus on the white flower/weed. The whiteness of the flower absolutely grabs my attention, don't get me wrong, but then I find my eyes wandering to try and discern what all those balls off dried up things are on the background stems/leaves as there isn't much for me to be drawn into once the flower has my attention. I gave a 4. |
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09/10/2005 01:34:22 AM |
Great find, the white seems so small. |
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09/08/2005 11:18:17 PM |
The white subject does not fill nearly enough of the frame. Its dead center which typically makes for a boring compostion. It would help to move it to one of the thirds. The background is also extremely cluttered making it very hard for your eyes to find a place to rest. |
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09/06/2005 04:36:44 PM |
christie, you need some comments so ill give my 2 cents
I'd definatly say high contrast between colors, you've got the whites in there versus the other dark colors of the leaves. the centered composition is boring to me in this picture, though I am a fan of breaking the rules. (my entry has centered composition in it as you know) overall I think the low score is mostly because its just not a trancing image, ive seen these flowers everywhere
i hope this (maybe your only comment?) helps. dont do drugs |
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