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09/18/2005 09:56:55 PM |
*Critique Club*
As a parent myself, I definatly feel that a child is a branch of a mother or father. Cute kid, by the way. I see where several improvements could be made. One is that the childs foot is cropped off. For this image I feel that it would have been better to have the entire body, or in a different pose from the waist up. Another suggestion would be that if we could see what the little photographer was shooting. I love that he is squinting, that is sooo cute. The colors are nice but the brick wall is kind of "bla". Overall I think it was a great try for the branch challenge. You went out of the box and didn't photograph a tree branch. You are so brave!! Good luck with future challenges!!!
Mandy |
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09/10/2005 12:48:11 AM |
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09/09/2005 05:38:03 AM |
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09/08/2005 05:59:03 PM |
| Good idea. The boy seems just a touch out of focus but overall a good shot. Nice lighting and color. |
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09/08/2005 05:03:17 PM |
| Love this one because he has the camera! What a cutie, too! |
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09/08/2005 01:39:30 PM |
| cutting him off athe mid calf was unfortunate, IMHO either get all of him or crop tight enough so I dosen't look like a mistake. Of course cutting out the grass would mess up he nice interplay of colors you have going on so.... |
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09/07/2005 11:30:37 PM |
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09/07/2005 10:40:22 PM |
| The youngest DPC-er yet. He'll give Joey Lawrence a run for his money. |
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09/07/2005 10:08:38 PM |
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09/07/2005 08:05:03 PM |
Thats so cute
and a very origonal idea
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09/07/2005 07:46:42 PM |
| Lovely study in concentration. The lighting being fairly flat probably looses you some of the impact available using such a cute concept. You might also like to find a link on compostition where i talks about "thirds" and why not centering a subject in frame is always the best - 5 |
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09/07/2005 05:28:57 PM |
| I appreciate your non-tree picture, however, i think you could have done more to make this an interesting picture. it does not WOW me at all. Adorable child and good outside the box |
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09/07/2005 04:57:52 PM |
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Message edited by author 2006-08-17 12:07:34. |
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09/07/2005 04:36:16 PM |
| a slight more contrast and a higher score from me. |
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