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06/08/2003 10:31:58 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
As I mentioned before, I think this works very well in the "duotone mode." Though I acknowledge the other comments about how colorful the signs would be, I still think shooting this in color would lose a lot of character and depth. I think it would make it raucous and busy.
By using the tones as you have, it does give it a vintage feeling. Looking at this picture makes it seem as if I have stepped back in time somehow, and am looking at the corner store for a small town near here.
My only complaint (and I had to look a while to figure this out) is that the cropping feels unbalanced to me. I think that since the end of the building, per se, can be seen on the left, it may give more of a sense of balance (at least for me) if it wasn't "chopped' on the right. Or conversely, crop it slightly tighter on the right.
Again, I think this is a very well done shot, and I apologize for not being able to offer more "help" with it. I enjoy your work.
karmat |
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06/01/2003 11:03:09 PM |
this is fabulous. I love the excess of signs and the perspective on this store. It looks as if the thing is tilting over too. :) |
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06/01/2003 05:48:40 PM |
If it weren't for the prices, this would look entirely like an old picture of an old general store, which is neat -- and presumably the idea. Good job on making it look very old-photograph. |
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06/01/2003 07:36:05 AM |
Interesting building study. |
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05/31/2003 12:58:59 PM |
Great subject! Lighting and sky is a little bland (worth re-shooting on a better day if have the opportunity). |
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05/31/2003 12:51:44 PM |
neat shot...seems that deeper brown/sepia would have worked better here to give more of a feel of age...but very nice image. thanks |
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05/30/2003 04:59:47 AM |
This is a good shot - visually fascinating; but the first thing that strikes me is 'why isn't it in colour?' (and I don't mean because it's a duotone challenge). |
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05/29/2003 10:03:02 PM |
The tone adds an old time feel to the image - good choice. |
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05/28/2003 01:22:46 PM |
This shot is an excellent example of how using duotone can improve a picture. It really gives it character, I think. In color, I can imagine it would be busy, or down right obnoxious. |
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05/27/2003 09:02:20 PM |
I like it but would also like to see it shot from slightly above rather than this angle |
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05/27/2003 12:53:57 PM |
Nice choice of topics. The angle and layout adds to the photo.
Good luck in the voting. |
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05/26/2003 11:31:02 PM |
Great scene! Looks like it would be an interesting place to visit. The tone is well managed overall, but I do find it a tad strong. Still, its a very nice shot. |
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05/26/2003 10:42:03 PM |
interesting subject, the lens/barrel distortion adds to this image. the lighting looks like an overcast sky which would make the image loose some texture. maybe play with curves or try with more interesting light. 8 |
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05/26/2003 09:51:51 PM |
the angle of the building is nice, but i seem to always look towards the sky, only to notice a rather uninteresting sky.. nevertheless, it's interesting to see all those signs :) |
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05/26/2003 04:23:44 PM |
wow. What a great subject for duo tone. Love it. REally has that old-time look. Jacko. 9 |
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05/26/2003 02:38:57 PM |
I feel that the common and recognisable signs work better with their colours and I'm not sure what point you make by removing them. |
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05/26/2003 12:40:59 PM |
Nostagic. I like the angle. |
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05/26/2003 09:44:30 AM |
like the tones in this shot.... give the shot alot of "mood".... good luck, Todd. |
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05/26/2003 09:27:43 AM |
I love this. Great angle and the tones are beautiful. Very well done IMO. |
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05/26/2003 12:43:14 AM |
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