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09/19/2005 10:03:33 AM |
| This wasn't my favourite pose, however I expected to come back and see it way up near the top 10. Didn't deserve to be way down here. Don't get discouraged hopper, you are showing some great talent!! |
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09/17/2005 04:16:50 AM |
| Love the DOF. Don't care too much for the pose. Maybe if her hands were locked together under her chin it would add to the symmetry? Or just one hand under her chin? Ok I just don't care too much for the way the chin looks here. :) |
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09/16/2005 07:10:59 PM |
I really like the composition of this shot
good luck |
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09/16/2005 03:24:53 AM |
| Nice portrait and interesting lines, this angle does not seem to flatter the subject. |
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09/15/2005 06:17:28 PM |
great model, great pose, nice lighting - over sharpened? look st the line between her face and her shirt. whats that from? again on the left arm.
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09/15/2005 07:53:10 AM |
| expression on model's face isn't natural. pose is interesting, but i think you should have positioned her head so that it was better in line with the rest of her body |
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09/15/2005 05:09:18 AM |
| Nice lines in this one, I acctually like the pose too eventhough it looke abit strained. The lighting is ok. I think maybe slihgtly tighter crop in the bottom could have put her head a bit less central and thus given a better composition, but it's not a biggy. 6 |
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09/14/2005 11:08:18 PM |
| This seems a little oversharpened specially lips and around and somewhat on hair |
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09/14/2005 10:10:14 PM |
| The picture overall is great, would loved to have the right and left sides cropped in a bit tighter, and less pressure from cheek from the back of her hand. - From the Wife. 7/10 |
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09/14/2005 12:56:34 PM |
| I hope this shot does well. Very nicely done I really like the overall mood and the way you captured her eyes. |
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09/14/2005 04:56:52 AM |
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09/13/2005 11:15:18 PM |
| I like how her body length and the background work together. Nicely done. |
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09/13/2005 09:09:26 PM |
| Beautiful model, interesting pose and composition. Not strong in colors, but very pleasing. <8> |
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09/13/2005 09:01:25 PM |
| I like the look in the models eyes. The shot is done very well tech. kudos on that. Now lets talk about the pose. The hand is stretching the face way out of proportion and the length of the pose is pulling focal points way to far back in the grame. the crease in the arm on the left side is distracting and the shade of lipstick doesn't match the skin tone. I do like the hiar and light on the face. I like where the left hand is also great shot overall |
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09/13/2005 04:02:44 PM |
| I think this particular pose makes her arms look really fat... not very flattering to the model. Perhaps a hands on the arms facial shot, because she is so pretty. Also, the lines in the background are very distracting, but great focus and centering |
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09/13/2005 04:02:43 PM |
| Hopper, to not only have exceptional photographic talent but also such a beautiful model at your fingertips is just a double blessing!!! Wonderful image, as usual. :) |
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09/13/2005 09:06:29 AM |
| Love the concept, but I think you should have lowered your body a little more....I dont think capturing her leg and feet added to the feel of this shot. The light is good. |
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09/13/2005 03:26:15 AM |
Very nice protrait. I had tried something similar in the portrait mentorship thread, and got a useful comment - try shooting from lower angle - that would allow you to focus more on the model and not have the blue jeans distracting.
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09/12/2005 11:53:12 PM |
| I think I would have liked to see her laying on grass instead of concrete. It kind of washes her out. |
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09/12/2005 10:19:43 PM |
| I once made a business card with a girl that look exactly like your model. Nice image. I like the pose. |
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09/12/2005 09:38:45 PM |
| This is wonderful, good luck. |
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09/12/2005 04:24:51 PM |
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09/12/2005 04:17:35 PM |
| This is really well constructed with the girl only laying on the lighter stone and framed by the darker ones. Lovely natural look on the girls face, Well Done! |
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09/12/2005 12:20:46 PM |
| You did a wonderful job of bringing out the beautiful eyes in this person. Nice even skin tones. |
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09/12/2005 09:22:20 AM |
| interesting use of the lines. Almost draws your attention towards her feet - not sure if you intended to do that. I wish I used guides better in my shots. |
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09/12/2005 08:49:24 AM |
| Very nice pose, good composition, near zero *natural* skin. 3 (But I bet everyone else votes high in this new plastic world we live in. Good luck.) |
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09/12/2005 03:29:51 AM |
| this is a excellent portrait and a telling one of the model, my only concern is the broken wrist and ungainly placement of the hand on arm8 |
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09/12/2005 12:44:36 AM |
| Great focus, beautiful model. I think this will be in the top ten. Good luck.~Roni |
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