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09/20/2005 02:23:36 PM |
| The line created from the left shoulder to the flower in her hair was a little distracting. The flower is so light that I mis-took it for an ear - only for a sec of course. I think changing the angle to remove the shoulder and maybe a brighter flower would make quite a difference. That being said I still like the picture and the upward angle of her glance. |
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09/19/2005 03:30:16 AM |
| Very, very beautiful portrait!! |
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09/18/2005 10:58:55 PM |
| Great bedroom eyes and lovely stare. Nice composition. 7 |
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09/17/2005 12:09:38 AM |
| Very sensual and earthy. I have come back to tis one ans raised my score. This is truly a portrait, and without being remotely traditional. Nicely done. |
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09/15/2005 10:54:30 AM |
| this is lovely and extremely well-done. |
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09/15/2005 12:04:05 AM |
| i find the shoulder a tad distracting and the way shes stretching her neck.. nice touch with the flower, nice lighting. |
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09/14/2005 10:59:44 PM |
| Beautiful model and I like the pose and the post processing. I think it would have been better without the flower. I think it competes for the attention. Great stuff. 8 |
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09/14/2005 10:07:55 PM |
| Colors are nice, love the eyes. |
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09/14/2005 10:02:54 PM |
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09/14/2005 09:28:46 PM |
| Absolutely beautiful. The pastels are amazing and the DOF is incredibly flattering. 10. |
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09/14/2005 05:31:24 AM |
| Love the lighting you used, not too crazy about the overall composition although i like the angle of her face. Some fuzziness on the left cheek right out from her nose is a bit distracting. |
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09/14/2005 05:17:45 AM |
| Lovely composition - Appears very smoothed though |
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09/13/2005 10:32:44 PM |
| Aside from it looking like her shoulder is coming off the side of her head in the background. I like the overall tones and lighting. |
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09/13/2005 12:40:16 PM |
| Good soft lighting....but the angle and focus leave something to be desired. |
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09/13/2005 11:35:50 AM |
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09/13/2005 10:32:28 AM |
| Wonderful warm soft lighting compliments her features nicely. the catchlights are nice, just enough to make the eyes speak. :-) The coloring is very please as is your composition. A very pretty natural looking portrait. |
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09/12/2005 05:48:46 PM |
| Wow. Sultry and angry at once. Great! |
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09/12/2005 02:21:01 PM |
she looks kinda drunk. I think if you would have had her lift her chin a little more it would have worked a little better. With that said you do have really nice light compisition and so on. I guess we all prefer different facial expressions
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09/12/2005 02:20:16 PM |
| I find the jutting angle of the model's neck to be rather disconserting, and the eyes are a touch soft, but i love the tones and the way she blends into the backround |
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09/12/2005 12:26:52 PM |
| Beautiful and well done! This is one of those (as i like to call 'em) "high scorers" that make my entries look like complete crap ;) Great job! Not a single thing I would change! |
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09/12/2005 10:50:27 AM |
| lovely. maybe a bit tight top to bottom, but oh well. This has such a nice intimate feel to it. |
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09/12/2005 10:47:32 AM |
great shot and compose/angle.. love it..
whould have been better witout the sleeping eye... |
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09/12/2005 01:12:08 AM |
| I like the softness surrounding her face. Beautiful skin tones. The eye position kind of bothers me, though. |
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